It's Hard to Find an Immortal

I have read more than ninety chapters and can't stand it anymore. I really don't like the heroine's character. The first time his physical constitution was exposed was when he was alone and discussing Taoism with a strange monk when he was 10 years old. His words exposed his physical constitution, which can be understood as a child who does not understand the sinister nature of the human heart. The second time, a 17- or 18-year-old girl disguised herself as a man and got drunk with the male protagonist unsuspectingly. As a result, she fell into the water and was found to have a pure Yin physique. It can also be understood that the heroine accidentally relaxed her vigilance after experiencing a highly tense fight. However, when the heroine woke up and saw that the jade pendant that covered her physique was still there, and her clothes were intact, it was a bit hard to explain that the male protagonist found nothing. The third time, he was abducted due to his physical condition being exposed. He refused to join the sect due to physical problems and was forced to disguise himself as a man. After his second uncle was injured and his life was shortened, he personally told Tianqiao, a mortal who had no ability to protect himself, of his pure yin body during a chat, which resulted in the death of Tianqiao and his wife. Also later, after Brother Jiang killed the so-called Dandy Jiang and rescued the female protagonist who was being scorned, the heroine saw that Senior Brother Jiang's expression was normal, so she felt that Brother Jiang had not heard her conversation with Dandy Jiang. When the heroine and her second uncle were hunted down for killing Jiang Dandy and the second uncle died, the heroine thought "it's all to blame on this damn pure Yin constitution" instead of reflecting on her past self-righteousness and lack of caution. The characters in the novel have no problems with their personalities, and they are not good or bad. Maybe I just want to relax after reading the novel with the beautiful heroine and the cool articles. There will be people who appreciate this novel and like the heroine, but it just doesn't suit my taste.

I just finished reading Cannon Fodder's Cultivation Guide, which ranked first in the rankings. To be honest, it's hard to find an immortal. One of the shortcomings of Cannon Fodder is that it didn't write down the difficulties of each promotion. Especially for the heroine, each promotion is extremely simple and she can be promoted casually. The promotion of other people is as easy as cabbage. It seems that everyone who cultivates to immortal can be promoted step by step. The second shortcoming is that the storyline is not fascinating. There are so many enemies in the first half of the heroine, and the level is low, and she has never encountered a life-or-death crisis. This is far different from this article. Although I read this article a few years ago, I still remember a plot where the heroine was chased by a transformed villain who sucked the dragon's bones and hid in a portable space for several years. I was very happy to watch it, so in comparison, Yunda is better at unfolding the plot and allowing readers to be immersed in it. But Cannon Fodder has one advantage: This is why it ranks first: it is very good at laying out the relationship between characters.

Seeing that "it is virtue for a woman not to have talent", she decisively gave up the book. Is this really a heroine story? 🤐

So well written! It would be nice if it was longer 😭😭 Looking forward to the second part

1. The writing date of this book. Everyone who is reading this, please note that this book was published in 2010. It is the earliest novel among the novels about a heroine who cultivates a special physique and upgrades her five spiritual roots. Don't say anything in the comment area that the plot of someone else's book is similar. Check the time before speaking, otherwise your post will be deleted without discussion. 2. Civilization and harmony come first. This is the author's first book. There are definitely some flaws in the writing and conception, and the ending is indeed not very good. Reasonable complaints are allowed, personal attacks, dirty words, don't say more, ban you without negotiation. 3. Reject spoilers. Regardless of the chapters or the comment section, spoilers are refused; even though I have read this book a hundred times, I don't like being spoiled by others; not to mention that there are books I have never read before, so all spoilers will be deleted. Let's talk about it here. (Reasonable discussion of the plot and spoilers are two different things) I hope everyone knows the above. If there are any omissions, I will add explanations later. (To add, Yun Ji has completed the guide book "Xian Ling Atlas", "Destiny is the Phoenix", the ancient poems "Cheng Luan", "Tian Fang". The new book of ancient poems "Zangzhu" is being serialized, welcome to follow up)

I have been cultivating immortality for more than ten years. A few days ago, I finally succeeded in practicing the golden elixir to get married. However, the doctor said that it was kidney stones and forced me to remove it. How can you explain...

Yun Da, I like your book An Immortal Is Hard to Find the most. I fell in love with Xia Xia because of this book. I think it is more beautiful than the Immortal Atlas I wrote later. I bought this book and read it several times, but every time I finished it I felt very regretful. I felt that the ending of the following chapters was too hasty, and many previous contents were not explained clearly. I really wish you could write a sequel to Yi Xian to see what the road to heaven is, what the destined person can change, and what the ending of the gamble is. I don't know if you can read my message. I'm really looking forward to a sequel or a second half like The Fairy Tale.

I finished reading the Chengluan update and went back to watch it. She is so pretty! What a masterpiece! I have read Yunji Da's Destiny as Phoenix, Immortal Spirit Atlas and Cheng Luan, and I think they are very good-looking and I like them very much. I have always thought that Cheng Luan is the pinnacle of them all. Although an immortal is hard to find, although it is a famous work, the writing style of the first part must be very immature after all... But now I have read the updated version of Cheng Luan again I really like Yun Ji's style and don't want to look at other people's. Looking back, I'm amazed at the result. No matter from the writing style, the setting, the plot, or the emotional description of the male and female protagonists, they are all excellent works. The writing skills are profound and I don't feel young at all; the plot The setting was considered novel at the time, but now it is considered a classic; the relationship between the male and female protagonists is sweet but not greasy, happy but not vulgar. It is really beautiful, I like it so much, I like this couple so much. When I saw Xie Xingchen and Yang Xiaosan who I wanted to like later, I stepped aside. Now I really like Qin Yi and Tian Ge. Ah [rose] [rose] [rose] [rose] I haven't seen the ending yet, and I look forward to the two of them becoming sweeter and promoting each other's progress in the future hehehe (I like the part where the male and female protagonists resolve their misunderstanding in the cave the most. It's so wonderfully written, and it mobilizes emotions so well, I love it so much)

The heroine feels more and more like a woman, and dressing up as a man makes her look less and less like a woman. At this time, the heroine doesn't bother to solve this problem. What is she doing? She was confused about why she was cultivating immortality, and then she got drunk next to a male cultivator without any precautions. Then she fell into the water and the man rescued her and found out that she was indeed a woman. Hahahahahahahaha, the heroine and the author are really talented! Why is it that in the novel about cultivating immortals, a woman disguises herself as a man and forces others to discover that the heroine is pretending to be a man? Is this world of cultivating immortals so cruel? Then why bother running away from the benefactor who had benefactor her back then, and pretending to be a man, pretending to be in a sinister state as if her benefactor wanted to kill her and eat her? !

It's still a good-looking movie, but unfortunately the female videos are all about the runaway little wife, which is really disappointing.

The heroine is not like a cultivator. She is not only soft-hearted, but also a bit arrogant. As she said herself, after being beaten and killed, she became indifferent and could even ignore human life. But then she felt uncomfortable when she saw the beautiful maids serving people at the Hu family's sales meeting, and in the forest. When he set up a formation, but was discovered and escaped, he already said that he was trusting. However, he was so careless in the Gubendan incident that he decided that Jiang was a playboy. He didn't understand the person at all, so he preconceived the idea. After getting the Gubendan, he didn't hide it properly and was not very careful, which led to him being recognized. In terms of Tianqiao's matter, it is understandable that they were excited to meet each other, but the heroine didn't even say anything about the Foundation Establishment Pill or her travels to find opportunities, but she revealed her biggest secret, the body of pure yin. Who knows if Tianqiao will betray her when time passes, or if there are any elixirs or talismans that make her tell her involuntarily, but the result is that However, Tianqiao was soul-searched and the secret was known. If Jiang told others before looking for her, or recorded the secret somewhere, and left a message to those close to him, saying that he would find out the secret if he couldn't come back. If Jiang had this idea, the heroine would not be able to escape this time, and would have to be reduced to a furnace for the Jiang family's use.

Because of the starting point of registering this book, there has been a severe book shortage recently, and I am almost vomiting after reading all kinds of books. I returned to my original nature and read it three times. Facts have proved that good-looking books are still good-looking no matter how long it takes 😁

I revisited the classic, White Moonlight in my heart, but I was really speechless after seeing some of the comments in the comment section. Especially those who just read dozens or a few chapters and then said, "I'm going to abandon the article. Please go slowly without sending it away, and don't mislead others." Later, many books were imitated from this book, so you think it is very old-fashioned because he is one of the earliest ones.

This ending always feels like a hole that has not been filled yet. . . I guess the heroine is the one destined by fate, but there is no explanation later! After saying this, two chapters are over! It's over! Even if I write two more extra chapters, that's fine! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!

New Year's wish for 2023, I hope the author can fill in the gaps and write the next one🎆

When I was in college, I was introduced to the books that taught me about female majors. I left comments to commemorate them. To this day, my favorite books about female majors are still "A Immortal Is Hard to Find", "The Atlas of Immortals", "Shenben Junliang" and "The Long Journey to Immortality". They are all books with big maps, imagination and good character creation. Basically, I will review these books when I have time.

The ending is too hasty and nothing is explained clearly. The purpose of the mythical beast temple, the main plot of the book, is not explained at all. It looks like a eunuch.

There are a lot of holes left unfilled, and the ending is so hasty. I really want Teacher Yunji to make a second part, but it's probably impossible because it's been so long and the teacher's style has changed. Even if it is continued, it's probably going to be difficult to write the same feeling as this one.

Female immortals are most annoyed by the Yin body, as if they cannot cultivate immortality without a pure Yin body, many things need to be added! Men's videos are most annoying about being seduced. It seems that you can't be the protagonist if you haven't been seduced. How many people have to settle for seizing in! In this book, the protagonist looks passable, but all the supporting characters have lower IQs! So, do you feel awkward or inconsistent? What a one-man show!

I'm a man, but that doesn't stop me from coming here to see your privacy.

Before I start watching, let me ask you what you have already seen. In the early stage, the male protagonist is stronger than the female protagonist. Is this the same in the later stage?

I particularly like the heroine's second uncle After reading this Duoxianxian novel, whether it's a male or female version, I like the description of family love the most. I particularly like both the heroine and the heroine's second uncle. Their images are particularly plump, and they are living people with their own thoughts.

After reading dozens of chapters, I can't stand it 😳. It's hard to comment on whether the heroine design is good or not. It has the flavor of the heroine w in ancient novels.

After reading it, I think it's very interesting. I should be able to write further even if I sit down. I think there is still a lot of space to write.

Shocked, there is a woman cultivating immortality

The Taoist couple relationship in this film is really the most standard one in my mind. Many other movies I have watched later were not as good as this one.

I still hope to make it into a TV series, as my reputation has increased before 🌹

Why tell Tianqiao that he is a pure yin body? She is a mortal, is it necessary to add such superfluous things and cause her death? The heroine is an adult and has been in the world for so many years, but she is still so stupid? The novel has always been portraying the heroine's cautious character, but when I saw this, I really didn't know what the author was thinking. It seemed that she was deliberately stupid to write off Tianqiao.

Author, do you know that rice stalks are not burned? One acre of rice stalks can be used for cooking and cooking for only two days at most. So rice stalks are used to start fires. There is no need to chop firewood to make fires in rural areas. Most of them are burned branches. When you grow up in rural areas, you will tear them off when you are 4 or 5 years old because they are all dry firewood. Oh, and rice straws for cooking. The heroine's family has hundreds of acres of fields to grow rice, so they can use rice straws to make fires every day. The first chapter is disgusting enough.

After reading the reviews, I almost gave up on this book. Because it was written by Ji Da, I decided to read it. The result was a surprise. I loved this book so much. As for netizens saying that the heroine is stupid, I think it is normal for a young monk to panic and do the wrong things and say the wrong things while being tracked by enemies. In addition, some netizens said that the author kept mentioning that the heroine is very short. I mentioned her height at most three times by the end of the book. This book is clearly organized, the storyline is seamlessly connected, and the growth of each character is explained. I like this book very much.