Hidden Beads

I got into the trap because of "The Atlas of Immortals" before, and I followed all your stories one after another.               ，， I didn't expect that "Hidden Pearl" would take it to the next level. It actually made me see the "liveness" ~ The charm of each character on the page, as well as the unique writing style, made me unable to stop. I can't describe it in other words. Ha ha. Although I cannot empathize with your experience, I hope you are in good health and that you will be happy every day in the future. As happy as the heroine in this book~ Although this is the second time I write a book review from the bottom of my heart, I still want to say: I love you, Yunji.

In terms of plot content, I can roughly divide it into three categories: Towards the enemy, domineering, domineering, domineering... To family members, gentle, gentle, gentle and gentle... To the male protagonist, irritating each other, antagonizing each other... Ps: When the male protagonist meets the female protagonist, her IQ is -5-5-5-5-5... (A nymphomaniac is a nymphomaniac, if you lose too much, you will become a fool!) ⑦If you click on the masters, there will be more male videos. The few female video masters are all writers whose quality can be guaranteed. The essay pen, this is a master, of course it is not bad, it can write the characters out of their own personality! This story is not a new idea! But many times, the focus is on how to tell a story well, rather than on innovating. The plot rhythm is very tight and the logic is reasonable. There is no situation where you suddenly want to go too narrow. The idea is still very clear! In an understatement, the saying "flies chase the smell, and ants attach themselves to the smell" is a bit interesting! You can quote something to show that you have something in mind! Looking forward to the follow-up, which will not only show everyone's style by quoting classics, but also speak so eloquently that others will be speechless! I saw someone saying that it was witty and humorous, emmmm, am I laughing too much? I think parts of the plot can be considered light-hearted, but the humor is still lacking. The brainstorming is indeed a bit humorous, but there is still room for improvement in terms of humor!

Qingqing Zijin, my heart is leisurely. But for your sake, I have been pondering it till now. Yo yo, the deer roars, eating apples in the wild. I have guests who play the harp and sheng. When transcribing the poem, the first thing that came to my mind was Xu Yin's recital. Ah Yin, it sounds so nice, beautiful and strong, heroic, and the Xu's twin girls are so eye-catching! The misery of the past life, the complete recovery from the present life, and I have read too many stories that are procrastinating and coy, and this neat revenge of the past life is really interesting. The part about Dongjiang's conspiracy to overthrow Li Da feels like we wrote it according to the hope in our hearts. That kind of protracted, redundant, long and slow story with no progress is very annoying. It should be so neat and easy to resolve the hatred. emmm, please don't hit me if you speak your mind. In this section of Dongjiang, when Li Wen Li Shizi and Yan Er, I can see a sense of CP. I can also see the sense of CP of Yan Ji and Xu Ze. It's over, I'm really not normal I started to get involved in Chengluan, and then I got to know an author named Yun Ji.

The assassination of Wu Zijing was really exciting. Xu Yin was really decisive and courageous. The characters of the protagonist group in this book are really delicious. I haven't seen such a real-hearted male protagonist in a long time (he is my favorite type ^ω^). Moreover, the writing is not sluggish, the momentum is coherent, and the rhythm is relatively tight. It looks very cool to have such a rhythm in such a chaotic background. Looking at the word count, the book is a little thin. I put it on the bookshelf for a long time before reading it in one sitting. However, the content is very substantial and there is no feeling of weak relay. If it keeps up, it may become a fine novella (implying that I really like the current quality⊙▽⊙).

First impression: Let's show off my cards first. I just wanted to mix up the title. After reading Wedge, I found that the writing style is very good. Except for the big background of Dazhou, Dongjiang, and Zhao Guogong, which made me a little confused at first (similar to the Three Kingdoms at the end of Han Dynasty?) This is the only writing style that the female channel can follow. Regardless of the whole story, the author's writing style makes people want to read. Serious book review: In terms of plot, the heroine was reborn more than ten years ago, on the eve of her father's death from poisoning, she broke the poison, made clever designs, punished the rebels, and traced the clues of the mastermind behind the scenes. The background of the entire story is somewhat placed in the late Han Dynasty, when Duke Zhao, King Dongjiang and Nanyuan were fighting for hegemony? Is Wu Zijing, King of Great Liang, similar to Lu Bu? (Current progress: Chapter 39) The character creation is quite successful. The Xu sisters have very different personalities, plus a personal maid who has a similar personality to the master. There is also the humorous Dr. Huang who is "disrespectful for the elderly"; the chivalrous man Chai Qi who repays every drop of kindness with a spring; and Wan Song, who seems to be a rough military commander but is actually very wise. I originally thought that the heroine's character was quirky enough, good-looking and resourceful; but the way the hero appeared, the character shown in his actions and words, I have to say that he and the heroine were a perfect match. A little worry: (Maybe I haven't seen enough) There are many interesting characters, male and female protagonists, and their own servants. This may lead to overlapping or too many similarities in personality, making the characters feel like characters. I hope I can grasp the details later. Each character has its own unique charm. PS: First go to the book review to take advantage of the situation.

The influence of Miss Xu San's "big evil" has been deeply rooted in people's hearts🤭🤭

Taking advantage of the book review activity, I would like to sort out my guesses about reading the book. If there is anything I don't understand, you are welcome to point it out! Several places involved in the past life, Nanyuan, Dongjiang, and Jingcheng. The section from Dongjiang to Beijing again involves Duke Zhao. After Xu Yin was reborn, Nanyuan got rid of Fang Yi, and the trip to Dongjiang got rid of Wei Si, which was considered a great revenge. Next, is it time to find out the person behind the scenes in the previous life? At present, the hidden dangers in Nanyuan and Dongjiang have been solved. Will the next map be moved to the capital or to Duke Zhao? In the past life, Xu Si was still the noble concubine of Emperor You. I wonder if the appearance of Li Wen in this life will change Xu Si's emotional line. The book is very interesting, but it is too short. It is being updated daily. . .

Chasing books is magical. To round things off, people who chase books are also amazing. Miraculously held back his words. Hidden beads. Like to watch. One is because of the heroine's character, the other is because of the writing style, the third is because of the plot. Fourth, of course, are the outstanding moments, such as every time the male protagonist climbs a tree, every time the female protagonist takes action, and every time Yanji opens his mouth, some book friends say that he is the emperor of truth. And the captain of the guard, hey, everything happened. He followed the third lady and gradually became able to adapt to the magical brain circuits of all parties. Even the bald Xue Ru seems to be happy with this name. He can't help but think divergently, and then think about cause and effect. The way of living is different, right, the pursuit is different, and the heart is different. As for the characters in Dongjiang, there are people who have rivers and lakes, and these rivers and lakes can be big or small. There are people who are willing to fight for fame, wealth, power and status. In addition, King Dongjiang is on the verge of death, so it is natural for the characters to have conflicts. Women from famous families also want to fight, so there is no harm in fighting. It's just that Wei Si is such a cool guy, how can I put it this way, how can a beautiful lady like Qing do evil? You have to control your bad intentions. Prince Dongjiang must never talk about the heroine's sister. Is Xu Siyue going to become a hero? Oh, no, it feels like I'm about to exert my strength Ah, I have such an amazing desire to express myself, just do it Ah! Reading comfort for lazy people! I just follow the author's ideas and read whatever he writes. It's smooth and comfortable! Everything I like is available here. Thank you for your hard work. I'm not in a hurry if I have to write some articles. Above. emmm I want something but I have lost something emmm It's not a big problem after all, I am a magical book friend (with a special face) I'm sorry for bothering me with my personal thoughts, hahahaha, I just wanted to post another unscrupulous book review, don't look at me

There is no rebirth, this is just the fantasy of Xu Yin who took revenge before his death!

This book is in my mind the best ancient proverb writing strategy and world-winning novel in the past few years. It is very gripping from beginning to end and the rhythm is very good.

How could Yan Xiaoer not miss such an important occasion? If you want to marry a wife, you have to show your face more

Some people will never miss it once they miss it

Later, I finally understood through tears

I like Xu Yin, she has the courage and resourcefulness to defeat Wu Zijing, this girl is great! The writing is very generous, and the romance is moderately sweet (I don't really like sticky romances, but I like works where the heroine is serious about her career and falls in love in her spare time). Take a look at it before going to work, and you will feel good for the day. Thanks to Teacher Yunji for his creation

I beg you, Yun Da, to write about Fairy Heroes, and listen to our old fans' voices 😭 Although I didn't read the few books I wrote after my transformation, I kept ordering all of them, because you are the one who wrote the Immortal Atlas! !

So far, many factions have emerged. Let's take a guess at the geographical location. The general background of the story is similar to that of the late Eastern Han Dynasty, when imperial power declined and warlords separated, so the capital may be in Henan; the Duke of Zhao who finally won in the previous life controlled Guanzhong, which is probably the Guanlong Group, the headquarters of Li Tang; the southern source of the Xu family should be the Jingzhou and Hubei areas, and military strategists must fight for it land; Yongcheng and other old Chu forces that have yet to be named may be the Bashu region, and Daliang should be the Nanman region of Yunnan, Guizhou, and Guangxi, which is large but not yet civilized; Dongjiang should correspond to the southeastern coast of Wuyue; Jiangbei is the Shandong Peninsula north of the Yangtze River. The emperor is still on the throne, and I don't know who will destroy this dynasty. However, the Xu family actually does not have much pressure: it is not easy to dominate the world just relying on Jingzhou Yongcheng, but it is not difficult to strengthen itself and then invest in a powerful backer. By relying on the marriage of their two daughters, they should be able to make good friends with Dongjiang and Guanzhong. The obvious villain at present is Jiangbei, but in the previous article, the mastermind behind the scenes was able to get the governor's memorial before the emperor, and even chose not to issue it. This shows that this person is extremely powerful in the center. I guess he is a relative or clan member. Although the Yan family won the world in their previous life, the two sons and brothers turned against each other, and there must have been some influence from outsiders to sow discord. I hope this can be avoided in this life.

Sister Yun, next time I write a novel about cultivating immortality. Please, I've read many novels about cultivating immortality written by other authors, but I still feel that it's not as good as yours. Sister, your writing suits our needs. I'm so greedy 🥺🥺🥺

You should also inform readers of the reason why there is no update or when it will be updated. It is so disrespectful to do so quietly!

In fact, I was moved when I first saw the introduction. Then I took a look at the names of the heroine and the hero, and I was really moved again➕1. But I am almost a scumbag who doesn't finish the article, so I always turned off the recommendation again and again, until I clicked on the fairy grass activity-it smells so good! When I saw that Yunda was said to be Jianghu, I was curious about what kind of story would be worthy of the word Jianghu. After reading it now, I can only sigh, it is indeed the legendary Yunda! Having chased it halfway, I was really worried that I would miss the fairy grass, so I will post it first 😌 Whether it is long or short, from QQ to Qidian, and following articles until now, what I love most is the love of gods. I can't define it, but I can clearly feel its warmth, sweetness and power in every story. I like Xu Yin who is bold, smart and sassy, ​​and I like Yan Er who is cute and handsome. I just accompanied them to kill the first dungeon boss. I feel so comfortable all over my body and I still have more to say! There is a long road ahead, and I hope those with love can go on it for a long time. Well, I feel like there are no spoilers 😁😁, so continue to follow the article, Xiancao, here I come! ! !

I just saw the new story of DaDa today. I read it in one go. I really like it. I like the characters of the heroine, the hero, the heroine's family, and the most important plot environment! It feels like it has really reached a new level~ The setting of the two sisters is really touching, the male protagonist is reliable, cute, and handsome, and the storyline is also very exciting, interesting, and meaningful. But don't be stressed. I see that I don't get enough rest often. I hope I can take good care of myself. Your health is the most important thing~

During the Spring Festival, I wish the author great luck: good luck will chase you, success will follow you, peace will surround you, worries will hide from you, health will stick to you, wealth will entangle you, and happiness will embrace you! I also wish Zangzhu's results will get better and better!

There is no way that the father of the male protagonist can clear his name and let his despicable adulterous son take the position of his legitimate son. The character of his first wife who was bullied like this is evident. Therefore, he deserves to have a bad ending in both lives. The hero's mother is also quite weird, letting an adulterer take away something that belongs to her child. This is not kindness, but stupidity. Kindness must be sharp, and giving in without a bottom line can only make you irrecoverable.

I didn't finish Tian Fang Shui's book. After reading this book, I felt as if it was not written by one person. The level of this book is more than one level higher in terms of structure, characters, and writing. The holes are filled in one after another, very smooth and reasonable The male and female protagonists are both strong. There are slight differences in the skill points and the characters. It is also pleasing that the three views are upright, the joys and sorrows of the world, the justice of the people, and the realization of self-worth are all taken into consideration, instead of like some stories where the heroine only does things for her own benefit Another point that I like very much is that the heroine's sister, father and other relatives are very smart, unlike some In order to show off the cleverness of the heroine, the others are all fools and need to be protected by the heroine. Unlike some novels, there must be a family sister who is jealous of the heroine. I used to be annoyed by Liu Da's Sijin and Jiang Da's weak dodder-like attributes. In this book, the sisters are all online except for not being able to do martial arts. It is very comfortable to read. Service serves as the link between two lives. Yan Xiaoer is willing to give up the achievements that were already within easy reach for the lost pearl in exchange for the witness of her defying fate. The setting of the old Taoist begging for food and returning favors is also a cute point. This hole is filled in well. It can be said that The summary is: I love it, I love it.

The Fairy Grass event has begun. I have always liked this title. It is full of fairy spirit! I first met Yun Da Cheng Luan, and watched it again because of Tianfang, but the updates were intermittent and I didn't finish it. I put it on the bookshelf and waited for it to start! Zangzhu has twists and turns. I wrote the story with great care and changed the opening many times, so I put it on my bookshelf, waiting to start reading it one day! After reading a few articles, I liked Xu Yin's revenge story at the beginning. After rebirth, he reminded his sister Xu Si as quickly as possible to stay away from the scumbag! Save your father, clean up Fang Yi, and your fighting power is off the charts! The male and female protagonists were quite funny when they first met. It was quite funny. The encounter was triggered by a horse, and Xue Ru was ordained. Hahahahaha, it made me laugh like a pig. There is also a horse who died heroically after being taken out of the game🐴. It really lives up to its name, lightning, and dies in a lightning bolt at the end! Its appearance is just for the encounter between Xu Yin and Yan Ling! Great support, please continue to pay attention. Reading books during the holidays! I like focused, quiet, enjoyable story-telling sessions where I can watch the brain-expanding stories! Looking forward to more exciting events! Come on 2021!

Which was the first book I read by Yun Da? It seems to be an atlas of fairy spirits (I'm sure) The first time I read this book, after reading the introduction, I felt that I would definitely like this book. Compared with the heroines fighting for hegemony in troubled times and the immortals asking for immortality, I really still like the ordinary people who tease cats and dogs and fight for leisure and grudges. I quite like the character of the heroine, but I still think that if she had a choice between a heroic heroine with extraordinary courage and excellent archery skills, and a heartless and weird idiot, she would definitely choose the latter. There is nothing picky about the plot If I have to say that there is something bad about this book, it would be nice if there were more updates (whisper)

I pray that everyone will be healthy and safe in the new year! ! Happy! ! More and more progress! ! Getting stronger and stronger! !

Xu Huan

Xu Si

I almost blinded myself from reading a book. I had no self-control at all. I didn't sleep at noon and stayed up until three o'clock at night. This long and beautiful novel is really exciting. I was moved by the story again. Such a beautiful relationship. The heroine is so kind and loving.

Finished reading. It feels like it's not on the same level as previous works, it's too watery. Not to mention the "Xiu Xian" movies that I like the most, I have also read "Tian Fang" and "Cheng Luan" several times. They are all very high-quality in terms of structure, text, story, and rhythm. Only in this one, the story is scattered, the pace is slow, and the characters are not clear enough, with a hammer here and a stick here and there. Especially the text, it's so funny, it makes you laugh and scratch your nose, it's like an anti-war drama. Are you sure it was written by the author himself?