Immortal Fate of the Violet Mansion

After finally spending a lot of effort to cultivate to the top level, he then committed suicide with his wife! One sentence sums up this book!

I remember when I was in junior high school, I thought it was very good, but the ending was terrible. When I finished watching it, I wanted to punch someone.

I read it when I was in junior high school. It was also the third mortal-style novel from "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality", "The Big Devil" to "The Immortal Fate of the Purple Mansion". Every book brought me a lot of new things. The author hastily ended the follow-up and wanted to create a Senjo-style novel, which deserves recognition. But you haven't even finished writing "The Immortal Fate of Purple Mansion", so there won't be anything else to follow. After the completion of "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality", everyone has been waiting for the Immortal World chapter. When the Immortal World chapter came out, I didn't comment much and just read it silently. But when we saw Zi Mansion, we were really moved and regretful. Baili, if you write about Zifu well, you may not be a so-called fairy city style, but you will definitely be a master of the mortal farming style. I have only read Purple Mansion and Immortal City, and I don't want to comment on the other books. Look at these books, they are not bad. Are you trying to fly before you can even run? In fact, if you open a book like Zifu Xianyuan and even move it over to improve the settings, it will be better than others. Many of the books I read now have the shadow of Zifu. I hope you can write a good book. Don't be unworthy of the readers. Just be worthy of yourself.

After reading Chapter 360, I really couldn't stand it. The author has a very serious tendency to belittle the protagonist, and it affected me. The protagonist is always inexplicably unknown. Whether he has made great achievements since the beginning of the mine, built foundation pills, been hunted down, defeated Amumeng, or grown rapidly in cultivation, etc., In fact, he should have become famous a long time ago, but after so many things have been superimposed, he still has to be forced to be "unknown" by the author. There is also an evaluation system, even though he is already a golden elixir, he was still looked down upon in chapter 360, saying that he has no background and no future. Let me ask you, before the age of 50, he was able to form elixirs all by himself, and he also became a Taoist couple with the daughter of the first elixir-former in the sect. Everyone should realize that this person is not a simple person. And this father-in-law is also a very big problem. The protagonist saved his daughter's life and unexpectedly became a Taoist couple, which is so interesting. Moreover, the protagonist can improve quickly without relying on any help from the heroine's family, which also shows that his luck, His character, wisdom, and combat prowess are all top-notch, but not only did he not do any favors to the protagonist, nor did he give any rewards, but he also made various arrangements, and did not have any communication with his future son-in-law during the whole process, let alone direct observation or contact. My father-in-law saw me picking my feet and trying to scrape the steel plate with a sharp object, which made me feel like Tang San and Huo Yuhao. I guess the author had a serious inferiority complex of "a poor child" when he wrote this book. As a person who has been through it, it was not easy to get out of it, but to see the author behave like this makes me want to punch someone.

Watched it again. I'm still not finished, let's read the author's next article 😊

Author, since you can't write about the relationship between men and women, why do you do so many foreshadowings of heroes saving beauties? When the male and female protagonists met by chance for the first time, you actually said that the male protagonist, a 20-year-old young man, was afraid of wolves in front of him, but he was afraid of tigers in the back and did not dare to reveal the veil of the heroine. You even wrote that the heroine passed out. Is the male protagonist you created such a loser? If you write this, 90% of adults will stop reading it. I guess you are a child under the age of 15 with no life experience, and you are also imitating adults in writing about heroes saving beauties.

Comment from a 7-year-old bookworm: This is the most novel that has the flavor of a mortal cultivating immortality. Unfortunately, it is not finished 😭. I even think Mortals is worse than this one.

I felt relieved when someone called him a bad guy. It's not in vain that I specifically downloaded the app to scold him.

After all these years, I get angry when I read this book. It's so well written, but it's so bad. The author's later books just don't have the feeling of Zifu Immortal Yuan. The masterpiece was ruined just like that. Uncomfortable.

You can openly kill the elder's son and openly use the elder's son's magical weapon in front of everyone. When you meet a woman, you have all kinds of reasons why you can't kill her. Bailixi, Bailixi is not young at all, why are you such a novice 😅