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Did Lao Gu change his vest? Can you tell me✔

The author has done a lot of research and the language is very vivid, but the writing style is too stiff. When he was telling one thing, he would suddenly disconnect and start talking about other things he didn't want to do, which made me think there were deletions (after comparing with other sources, most of them were not deletions). In addition, when he narrates, he doesn't pay much attention to the priorities and simplicity of the story. A trivial matter is written in great detail throughout the whole article, but a key turning point is brushed aside or even ignored at all. These characteristics of writing make people look depressed. It's like a person talking to you hesitantly and unreasonably, not straightforward at all. I guess that the author may be imitating the writing techniques in famous books and does not want the writing to be too straightforward. But if you don't have a scholar, you might as well talk about it in a straightforward way. Another person with a similar style to him is Yueguan. This person also likes to be mysterious in his writing, and the breaks and turns are so dangerous that it can make people dodge. It ends abruptly at the key plot point, and many chapters later it begins to be told in detail again, but the reader has lost interest. It is estimated that the author has not written for many years, so he may not be able to read these words I wrote, but he will not complain about it.

This book was pretty good for being written more than ten years ago.

Gu Long's masterpieces, Gu Long's new works, Gu Long's masterpieces, Jin Yong's new works, Jin Yong's masterpieces. When martial arts novels were popular back then, there were many copycat authors, as well as fake authors, and some randomly put the names of popular authors on other people's novels.

The protagonist you chose is such a loser! He studied music and worked as a pimp for the rich. He didn't know geography. He traveled overland from Europe through Siberia and the Mongolian grassland back to the Ming Dynasty, bringing with him a lot of wealth! It's all thanks to the author's love that he can survive until now. Although the sea route is far away, you can go to Macau or Guangzhou Port, buy a boat, and hire more people to protect you. Isn't it better than this?

The concept is very good. Starting from Russia, the map is changed, and most countries in Asia and Europe are basically involved, giving full play to the advantages of the late Ming Dynasty. Moreover, it is better to be a slave at the beginning and slowly become successful than to be a normal writer. But why did I give up half way through? 1. What is the protagonist's life goal? It seems not very clear; 2. The writing is difficult. Don't ask for flowers, but don't ask for dullness. No humor, little rhetoric, not touching, and boring. 3. After the map was changed to Liaodong, it was similar to many Ming Dynasty and Qiang Guowen, losing their advantages and not as good as other people's writing and motivation. Alas, what a pity.

I have been reading online articles for more than ten years, and now I am looking back at old books, Guan Guan, Mao Tiao,...

I actually replied. I remember this book was also blocked.

His first book was called Shuizhuo Sanguo. The content was humorous and witty. The protagonist's surname seemed to be Xu, maybe not Xu. I can't remember clearly. This book has disappeared for some reason. It was a long-lasting memory with no trace and was slowly forgotten. Isn't it said that the Internet has memory?

To the harmonious classic, the brain-dead General Administration will die, offer incense, and toast!