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It's alright, it's a decent resource, but there are often a lot of words crammed together, which is really uncomfortable. Also, the protagonist is a bit too weak and acts very poorly. I feel quite frustrated when I see scenes where the protagonist is powerless.

After reviewing it once, what can I say? The plot is extremely illogical and has major problems. Even though the protagonist clearly knows he can be resurrected, he still insists on playing political games. It's not that this plot is unwritten, but you should at least raise the combat power to a level that the protagonist should fear. Instead of a knight who can't even catch a thief. Or you could first establish the world's power, showing how powerful it is, so powerful that the protagonist dares not reveal himself.

It's a great read, author, keep it up, don't abandon it!

I feel like we could use fewer idioms. Try to write as few long sentences as possible; one paragraph should only have one period. The very first chapter might deter some readers. 🙂🙂 I personally feel that reading it will be a bit tiring.