There Are Too Many Gods, Men, and Magical Girls

The mental state of these people is not like magical girls fighting monsters, but like magical girls in jail.

Overall, it's pretty good. The writing is not as comfortable as a newcomer's. It looks like a god but I don't feel like a demigod. There's nothing particularly difficult about the logic. Except for the characters such as Qing He, who are a bit too cheesy, and the very classic and very unnatural problem of the magical girl's lack of money. The monthly income of a magical girl who has been working for four years is only 6,000. There is nothing wrong with it. Comparing the salary with this, I feel that my job has a lucrative future.

There are no details about stock trading, and the characters and world view are not very prominent 😭 I didn't even understand the main line of the story. Is it just to pay off the debt? The motivation is a bit too weak? The current magical girl literature is so voluminous and crazy that I tried to write tens of thousands of words but failed to finish it. The main reason is that the main storyline is too difficult and painful.

[There is no clear main line in the first 20 chapters: no fighting, no crisis, no stock trading] may be one of the important factors that leads to the plot. Flirting accounts for too much, and I don't seem to like it very much at the beginning. You need to write something more or less, otherwise you won't be able to keep up with the abstraction in the middle and later stages. In addition, the flirting has no main line and you will only write more and more and lose your grades.

I feel that although this book is not particularly outstanding, the score is still a bit low compared to what it should be. It may be because the title attracts readers, but when they come in, they find that it is different from the "god-man" they expected, which creates a sense of gap. However, the concept of "god-man" is a bit abstract, and everyone's ideas are different. This is different from person to person. Just like Jiang Shenren next door, some people hate his character but also like him, so I think the author still needs to highlight a "feature" when creating the character, which is the kind of feeling that can make people shine, because at present, I think the character image written by the author is still a bit biased towards the "popular", which makes the "god man" in the title not very prominent. The above is purely personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. I can still read the author's book. If the author continues to update, I will still follow it. I hope the author will write better and better.

I've only been reading it for more than 30 years. It's strange. Although this book can't be called a magical herb, it's not so cool.

If so, I can probably guess who you are.

Overall, the text is very smooth and the story is quite interesting. It is worth reading. But although it is a bit early to say this, after all, this book has just begun, but overall it is a bit dull, and it does not require big explosions or anything. After all, it is easy to mess up if you always pursue explosive points, and it is difficult to write long, but at least some foreshadowing of the world view and explosive points should be buried. Now the only driving points of the plot are money owed and the identity of the protagonist, which is not bad, but the driving force always feels a bit weak, and it is completely impossible to see the possible direction of the subsequent story. There are also some deficiencies in the memory points of teammates. It may be that the author thought of the chapter corresponding to the other party to enrich the character, but it is still recommended to improve it first. It always feels a bit flat now.        , , , , , , , . Nowadays, if the novel doesn't have enough eye-catching performance at the beginning to make people stay, it will be difficult to get good grades.  (Die Jia) I have never written a novel, and the above is just my personal opinion, which may not be correct. If something is wrong, just pretend that I didn't say it, and I am a pure scumbag. I will not be responsible for the author's problems after listening to my opinions.

Leek magical girl? How come this theme can have everything?

He obviously has the ability to fry fish, but he chooses to take the wrong path of stock trading.