After Buying the Rat Talisman, I Became Light

Everything else is okay, except that the author wrote that the protagonist throws the Rat Talisman on the bedside table while sleeping and then revives the Yu-Gi-Oh card when sleeping, which is a bit uncomfortable. It feels that the protagonist is heartless and brainless. This scene that promotes the plot is really not good. If you write it like an earthquake and the Rat Talisman is moved, or have the Turtle Sentinel and the Rat Talisman separate, and the Rat Talisman accidentally drops the Revival Yu-Gi-Oh card, it would be more reasonable.

I don't think it's a hodgepodge. If you love writing about playing cards, you can just change the title of the book to playing cards.

This book was copied from Tomato, "Supporting Role in Time Travel Love Series?" "I Became a God with the Mouse Charm" changed Cardcaptor Sakura's cards into Yu-Gi-Oh cards. I guess he traveled back in time to save the heroine later, and they are exactly the same.

If you can't grasp it, don't write a hodgepodge. It's quite bland and boring to watch.

The hodgepodge is so boring, why not turn it into a light travel?

It's a mess, selling sheep's head to dog meat.

At this level, writing about a large-scale miscellaneous meeting is a sure thing. All the writings about Tianliu are better than this

A hodgepodge of selling dog meat on sheep's heads

It can only be said that the protagonist's ability to stay alive and nourished is all due to the protagonist's aura. Before the protagonist took the spell, he was so arrogant and arrogant that no one on the set of Conan even took advantage of it. The protagonist is also extremely lucky.

I haven't seen the plot of turning into light so far.