Cross-Time Matchmaking: Starting in the Three Kingdoms

As the book goes on, it becomes more and more like the formula of the History of Time and Space. It was good at first, but then it started to fall apart. The author of that book himself said that he could no longer write it, so he could only cut out all other main lines and make the scene of the Red Mansion the main line. Rewrite the simple white text about picking up girls. This kind of time travel with active participation in the historical process is not something that novice writers can control. You need to know a lot about politics, economy, history, humanities, and science and technology. You don't need to be very sophisticated, but you need to cover a wide range of topics to be able to write well without getting stuck. That one from the beginning of the Three Kingdoms was relatively unsatisfying. It didn't have much direct face-to-face contact with historical figures, and it didn't offer much modern products. I just express the views of later generations and let the ancients figure it out for themselves. A lot of logical flaws are avoided. A single viewpoint from later generations can fill many chapters. Not too stuck, but still able to make money. Everyone also likes to watch it. You can only read this book for a while now, and then come back and take a look if it is not broken or in the palace.

Dog meat won't make it to the table! Did he become famous in the Northern Song Dynasty? So ridiculous

I just feel that the protagonist is too incompetent, and he travels through time without self-protection. After time traveling, anyone can bully him.

If you write several of them together, you won't be able to control them. It's better to do them one by one.

I really don't dare to read the last few chapters. Every time the protagonist kills someone, he will have an inner demon. It really is. The main character is too useless. In ancient times, people would be trembling with fear when killing someone, and their minds would turn white. Have you never killed a chicken? Have you never seen blood? No blood? The last few pictures have been very boring. Too weak. It's better to leave it on my bookshelf to gather dust.

I haven't seen such a useless protagonist in a long time 😅😅 It's normal to rush into the street

Lengthen some of the main lines, go back and forth, and you won't feel the real content at all. Your story line is really like piecing together a dd, piecing together here and there. It would be okay if you had stronger writing skills, but as a new author, your writing skills are limited, brother! I saved it for a few days and then came back to read it. I finished it with this expression! It was quite interesting before it was put on the shelves, but after it was put on the shelves, it was hard to explain. I have supported you all the way, but now I really feel that I can no longer support you. At first I really liked this book, and I really hoped that the author could write something of his own. But the greater the expectation, the greater the disappointment. Of course, it is unrealistic to ask too much from a new author. It's just that, in today's Internet environment, the bland writing style of authors really doesn't have a wide audience. The protagonist's strength is mediocre, similar to that of ordinary people, and the story line is uninteresting and boring. You can at least make some waves! More than a hundred chapters have been published, but it's still the same. No matter how much money I have, I can't support it anymore. If the author feels that the results are okay, then pretend that I have not said these things. It may be that what I personally like is different from what other readers like. For now, this book will be gathering dust on my bookshelf. I'll look back at it when I think of it in the future. Finally, I wish the author better and better results!

It feels like it was written by a female author😏

Lao Li's family is not Han, so why are they talking about reorganizing the Han family?

Let's have more protagonist roles and less fighting scenes. It's not that the fighting scenes are bad, it's mainly that the protagonist has no sense of involvement. What's the point of being described by others? Write it as you like when the protagonist has the strength to participate in the war. Before it was put on the shelves, I wanted to complain. I skipped through a lot of non-protagonist chapters. Now that I have read it again after it was put on the shelves, I dare not subscribe just by looking at the title. Please give the author more roles for the protagonist. There won't be so many transitions after it is released. We are not here to watch the supporting roles!