Mortal: Begin by Transforming into Senior Brother Lu of Yellow Maple Valley
凡人：从穿成黄枫谷陆师兄开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 119k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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52Chapters
109Votes
70Recs
1Fans
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This hasn't even started yet. The introduction is a stallion story. You need to choose a Taoist companion. A young master like Ling Yuling or Yuan Yao will do. Leave the others alone. Cultivation is not about being a nanny. Both of them have the potential to ascend to the spiritual world, and they are helpful to the protagonist. What else is there? Don't write it down.
How should I put it? It is recommended to enter the factory 😎😎
The situation of the original work has been changed randomly
Who said you have to practice Qi at the thirteenth level and take the Foundation Building Pill to build a foundation? The thirteenth level of Qi training is basically achieved by taking the Foundation Establishment Pill and failing to build the foundation. It is also a real show if you can do the early, middle, high and Dzogchen levels of the thirteenth level of Qi training. The original text clearly states that you can try to build the foundation after the seventh level of Qi training.
The author may not only have never read the novel, but also the animation. Xin Ruyin came to Yue country.
One is Li Feiyu and the other is Senior Brother Lu. I can't read a novel where these two are the protagonists.
Chapter 1: Persuading people to quit. Even the timeline is unclear. How can I still write this as a fan? Are you kidding me? As long as the average reader has read Mortal, it's fine not to be picky, but the general timeline and basic logic have to be clarified, right? What's more, authors who write fan fiction should at least read the original work carefully, right? It took Han Li about ten years to enter Yellow Maple Valley and build the foundation. No one would care about the difference of one or two years, but it can't be wrong, right? This is the most basic attitude. If you have a problem with your attitude, what else is good about this book? When you write a book about yourself, how many people do you think will read it?
The protagonist was forced by a few casual cultivators to eat the Bone Erosion Pill and refine the Foundation Building Pill for them. 🤔
Extremely poisonous, maid Xin Ruyin is given to the old man by the protagonist
The old man still wants to join forces with the protagonist to harm the protagonist, and he will make the protagonist swear an oath from his inner demon at every turn, and the protagonist will not even fart
The new book has been invested, the author keeps updating! ! !
The timeline is wrong. After Han Li came out of the Scarlet Forbidden Land, it would take 4 years to build the foundation. After 4 years of building the foundation, he went to Yanjia Castle and the demonic path began to invade. OK