Naruto: Come on, Control Me as Hard as You Can

The writing is okay, but I have been unable to unlock the Magatama Sharingan by myself. It's impossible, it's too fake.

I feel that the book I wrote is good and interesting. Maybe the reason for the poor results is because I haven't finished the cover yet.

Dude, you, a Chunin, killed dozens of Chunin, Special Jonin, and Garin, even four of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist, and Konoha didn't offer you any reward? Do you think that's reasonable? The protagonist wasn't even given a moment's rest; the longest he got was spent in the hospital exhausted from fighting the Seven Ninja Swordsmen. Emm...

The weapon of Loquat Juzo is written as Samehada, and the weapon of Watermelon Mountain Puffer Demon is written as beheading sword. Al has finished changing it. Don't you want to read it? It was sent directly

I don't know what's wrong with online novels these days. Those writing alternate history want to create an empress, those writing about not being a chat group admin want to create a female group admin, and now those writing about being a game character want a female streamer/player. All I can say is the creativity is good, but people are repressed.

😰 If you insist on using Fang Tian Hua Ji, you should learn to open 8 doors and the magic power technique. This will be a real numerical monster. . . . . Moreover, it is hard to see how an Uchiha whose bloodline has been cut off is unparalleled in the world. Even if you change Shark Muscle to Fangtian Painted Halberd, the weapon may account for a little bit of value, or the dragon veins may be absorbed. Therefore, the protagonist has no numerical value at all. The success every time is just a player grinding it out bit by bit by constantly resurrecting.

What does it mean for the heroine to dress up as the hero?

Remove the halberd, and it's a decent story (no Naruto vibes), like a Marvel fanfic about wielding a peach wood sword, with a swift and urgent feel.

Is the author sleepwalking in the last two chapters? It feels like the story is about to be abandoned.

The two latest chapters are poorly written. Danzo's Izanagi grants invincibility for a limited time; in the original work, he has 10 of them, so it lasts for 10 minutes, not 10 resurrections. The online rumors about 10 resurrection abilities are just that—rumors. Furthermore, maintaining it continuously consumes a huge amount of chakra. Also, Danzo doesn't know how to use the Transfer Seal; only members of the Uchiha clan can fully control it. Danzo's practice of using other people's organs prevents him from unleashing the full power of the Sharingan. Current fanfiction often overpowers Danzo to highlight the protagonist's strength. In the original work, only in situations like Shisui's Mangekyou Sharingan or political infighting in the Land of Rain would he gather so many people to ambush someone. And now, during wartime, going to a camp for a mere three-tomoe gem is unthinkable, even for a protagonist with incredible military achievements. Even the Uchiha clan's Shisui with his Body Flicker and Fugaku with his Fierce Eyes weren't this extreme. Danzo's power isn't as large as it was later; his main duties are intelligence gathering and assassination. The reason there are so many people in the anime is because the Fourth Hokage and the Nine-Tails Jinchuriki died in battle, and Danzo, under the guise of Root's obligation to counterbalance the Uchiha, absorbed members from other ninja clans. Wood Release can absorb chakra, but it's impossible to completely absorb physical chakra like Fire Release or Lightning Release all at once. You didn't just watch some Naruto commentary online and then immediately started writing this article, did you? Also, the protagonist mastering a ninjutsu and being able to use it skillfully are two different things, and ninjutsu also requires hand seals. Adding this weapon here, I know you're trying to ride on the coattails of the bandit leader, but it feels weird, the progress is too fast. If you continue in this state, it means you haven't carefully checked the settings, and there are too many conflicting minutes. I doubt many people will see this.