A Guide to Surviving in an Apocalypse Safehouse

I feel like the story itself is pretty good, but there are too many settings. Whether it's story settings, skills or characters, it's all a bit too much. How should I put it? It feels like the author wanted to express too many things, and he wanted to write them all, and then piled them on the beginning. Even now, it is a bit confusing. I think the author can change the entry point. There is no need to foreshadow the heroine's life so early. There is no need to start laying the foundation before everyone even remembers who the protagonist is, where she is, and what she is going to do. It is better to establish a sense of immersion first, and then slowly introduce more story background and settings. You can even start directly from the part where she enters a different world and starts to survive. Each small world leads to a few abnormal places, and slowly completes the puzzle. Don't be hasty and speak slowly. The world view of the story is very large, so you have to pay attention to the output of information, otherwise everyone will be tired from reading it and will not be able to remember it. (This is just my personal opinion, if you don't agree, just pretend I didn't say it haha😄)

I wanted to find some post-apocalyptic articles, and unexpectedly clicked in, only to find that this female channel is really scary...

In Chapter 7, the heroine will tell an unknown person in detail all the skills of her prophet. In Chapter 8, the heroine begins to hesitate whether to be a lone wolf, emphasizing that she is an ordinary person. [What I'm curious about is that this skill in Chapter 7 can't be placed separately. Can't it just display disaster? The author's writing style is relatively new and he likes to write everything in it. I want to write down the fantasy feeling in detail. But the overall rhythm is what I like, and I can only wish the writing will improve soon. The thing that bothers me the most is actually the heroine. She is just weak now and should consider survival, but seeing the heroine being paranoid about being victimized by the system makes her very helpless. There is no down-to-earth feeling, it is all speculation about the later conspiracy. At least I have to slowly guess and confirm it, so that I can have a normal rhythm. It's quite helpless to think so much so early. It's destined to be a short article. I found that I didn't seem to like the pace that much, so I could slow it down a bit in the first few chapters, but then it really progressed like crazy. The heroine occasionally behaves foolishly, which is inversely proportional to her reasoning IQ, and she advances crazily.

Damn, please don't keep updating. As long as you work hard, you will always be popular.