Watching the Fire from Across the Shore

Personally, I think the emotional foreshadowing and character creation are quite good, but there are some deficiencies in other aspects. If there is anything that can be improved, I hope readers can comment on it. Thank you.

It's strange. The emotional shaping is quite good, but I don't know what it is. It's a bit strange to read. It requires a little reading and understanding. The explanation is not very clear. I don't know if it is because I scanned and read too fast. I feel that it can be improved.

Okay, okay, Uncle Zhang is such a familiar name, I'll go.

This is the second book I have written. I hope you can collect it and support it. Thank you very much. I will try my best to write better. If you are not satisfied with anything, please give me some suggestions. Thank you very much.

Can you support me, give me a recommendation vote, and if possible, add it to your bookshelf. Thank you very much for your support.

At the beginning, I was very good at characterization and emotional tone. I was attracted by it. After I read it, my ability to set up and focus on the big and small was also very good. Readers are welcome to discuss it.