Warhammer: The Lost Primarch’s Bizarre Adventure

The three golden chapters are written in a fascinating way. There is no warhammer flavor, but a strong fantasy and suspense flavor. No work.

The setting looks like the second primarch Sekiryu Teijun that was removed from the shelves in the past.

I still want to ask, boss! , Can the pair of Sanguinius and the Red Dragon Emperor be saved? 😭

I can't stand it 😒

The writing style is okay, but the novel is written like prose, and the plot is incoherent. It feels a bit like something I posted in the middle of the night in middle school. I wrote whatever I thought of, but fortunately, the subjectivity in one chapter is still understandable. The character creation is not clear, not particularly facial or formulaic, but not outstanding enough. I understand that the author wants to write that kind of epic feeling, but you can't do it or you're trying to imitate it. The details are not appropriate enough. Some interludes, foreshadowing, and foreshadowing take up too much space, and it is difficult to distinguish the priorities. There are even so many that I can write several chapters. In short, the book can be read, but the problem is not small. The above is just my personal opinion for reference only. There are a thousand Shakespeares in a thousand people.

A nicer way of saying it: the writing is full of Warhammer flavor A bad way of saying it: it's written in a blaring way, and it's tiring to read.

Are you interested in a large number of adjectives? Can you tolerate most of the nagging feeling in this article? If you can accept it. Then this book should be suitable for you.

There are too many dialogues in Japanese light novels, which makes it hard to read.

Author, author, it seems that you have not regained the feeling at that time, and it is not very enjoyable to watch, for the sake of the Red Dragon Emperor

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