Mortals Cultivating Immortality: I Have Douyin

Personally, I think Nangong Wan is a thunderbolt. Do I have to be greedy and sleep with her during the Qi training period? Golden elixir monk, I bet that I won't kill you if I am in a good mood! The original work is the original work, I don't want to lower the IQ of the characters! If it were at that time point, I could just teleport and run to the Sea of ​​Stars. I would just sleep with her and then run away directly! But what is slightly more realistic is that if you don't touch her, she will die or not, and it doesn't matter who she sleeps with! If she died, it would be okay to get her inheritance. How can you waste so much time on Qi training and foundation building? I have read the book Transformation of Gods, and I picked up Nangong Wan at the beginning, and I also finished it! The protagonist has become a god, so he can sleep with whoever he wants! Looks good too!

I won't grab the vial, and I won't sleep with Nangong Wan, which doesn't mean giving or licking her. But this book is really worth giving away, so Chen Qiaoqian will give it to him! Nothing matters! Originally, Chen Qiaoqian was not easy to write! It is not helpful for cultivating immortals, and it is difficult to cultivate Yuanying, let alone become a god!

For many supporting characters, if they can reach the golden elixir, Yuanying is already at their limit. The protagonist doesn't know how many elixirs to give them, and the bottleneck has to be helped! With their mental aptitudes in the original work, if they were to become Yuanying gods, they would really feel a little sorry for those monks who have cultivated themselves to become Yuanying gods. In the original work, monks who can only practice qi and build foundations, I can't figure out why they become golden elixirs and Yuanying at a younger age than those who are dedicated to seeking the truth and have better talents.

I also have another book - Frozen Miles Away, and to be honest, that book is a bit hard to finish! The book written by Mrs. Wen must have collapsed. Now the book is trying its best to reduce Mrs. Wen's presence! The outline of that book should have been written 7-8 years ago. The anime was not released at that time. In fact, I published a book on Qidian. The plot of Ghost Mist was replaced by other scenes and Hongfu! After the anime came out, one's hair became longer and longer. Second, it is difficult to wash Yunlu here.

I've read hundreds of fanfics. The conventional female protagonists are actually Yuan Yao, Zi Ling, and Ling Yuling! Nangong Wan, if the protagonist is a Jindan monk or above, it makes sense! Xin Ruyin, it's all unreasonable! Her formation talent ranks among the top ten in the history of the human world, and is currently among the top three. There is nothing wrong with that! But we must consider the actual situation and physical problems! This book, I'm still thinking about what to do with her! I don't want to be a nanny, so I train Qi and build foundation to take care of her, but it feels useless! I don't know whether this book will go to Luan Xinghai or not, because there is another way to write it! Ling Yuling, I don't think it's possible for the protagonist to know her during the foundation building stage! Even if you go out during the foundation building period, you will be accompanied by Nascent Soul cultivators, but there is a high probability that you will not go out unless you have cultivated the golden elixir. In other words, how can a middle-class young man get to know the second generation in Beijing? No social circle at all! We have really reached the Nascent Soul stage. Such a young Nascent Soul has a lot of secrets of his own. The two saints are not good people, so don't get together with them! If you become a god, you can accept them all, let alone Ling Yuling or Wen Qing.

I have no interest in the erotic scenes of Nangong Wan in The Bloody Forbidden City, and I even find them very vulgar and disgusting. Many fan authors and readers have distorted the core meaning of the Bloody Forbidden Land to revolve around Nangong Wan, which in itself deviates from the core of the original work of cultivating immortals and seizing treasures. The golden treasure chest in the magic dragon area in the original work does not specify the contents inside. Fans can completely expand the content reasonably and there is no need to limit the setting. Nangong Wan gave birth to a baby when she was more than two hundred years old. In contrast, Song Yu, who had the same Tianling root, only gave birth to a baby when she was more than 350 years old. It was impossible for her to achieve this through her own cultivation alone. The source of the massive cultivation resources could be reasonably extended to the ancient relics of the Bloody Forbidden Land. After she gets the forbidden land token, she has every opportunity to go deep into the forbidden land to search for elixirs and ancient inheritance. The golden treasure box can also be set with matching skills and inheritance. The protagonist should actively compete for such opportunities instead of turning a blind eye. I am extremely disgusted with using such illusory and mindless settings as the reincarnation of Daluo to explain the plot and explain why the protagonist does not take action against Han Li. A reasonable way of writing it should be that both sides have equal cultivation levels and are not 100% sure of killing each other. This is in line with the realistic logic of the world of immortality. In many fan fiction, the protagonist has his own time-travel device, but he is always passive. He is led by Han Li throughout the whole process, losing the sense of satisfaction of the immortal cultivator taking the initiative and controlling the overall situation. When we read Mortal Fans, we just want to get rid of the suffocating feeling of forbearance and timidity in the original work, and pursue a reading experience of proactive planning and step-by-step preparation, instead of being forced to rely on Han Li and being controlled at every turn. It is even more unacceptable that some authors write the protagonist as a licking dog, blindly giving opportunities to Han Li, protecting Han Li at all times, and living as the opponent's personal bodyguard. There are also outrageous settings that forcibly strengthened Han Li's combat power. The peak of the core formation was as strong as the mid-stage Nascent Soul, and he relied on low-level formations to infinitely amplify Han Li's aura of immortality. The protagonist himself is a time traveler, and should have had his own luck advantage, but in the end, all his luck lies with Han Li. This setting is illogical and has a very poor look and feel. As long as the fandom can get rid of this passive and aggrieved writing style, let the protagonist actively plan and fight for opportunities independently, and get rid of the setting of relying on Han Li, it will be a qualified work. {"NickName":"Book Friends 140423201311716","UserId":186276062}