The New King of Edo

Very similar to Onimusha and Nioh fanfic. I like it😍

The subject matter is good, I like the Edo period

Good guy, I recently played Nioh 3, and I feel a sense of déjà vu 233

It started out a little slow, with a lot of foreshadowing, but after 30 chapters, the pace picked up significantly and it started to look good.

After reading the introduction, I felt like the spoilers were basically over and I didn't want to read anymore.

This title is eye-catching, but in fact, in today's Dharma-ending era, traffic is indeed not enough. When I first read this book, I thought it was very mediocre. I even thought the author was a poor writer because he couldn't write the previous book. But I was wrong. What's wrong? My fault is that I have been careless. In the past year, I have been bombarded with short dramas and have no time to read books at all. The slow beginning was a disaster. Plus, I like reading history. The ending gave me a game theme, which made me want to scold the author. But I have the quality to hold back and not give up. It wasn't until I read about 100,000 words that I discovered that the author was awesome. He was actually doing science popularization. New genre, new genre! It's so rare. The key is that what he wrote is big-headed and true. It makes perfect sense when I think about it carefully. Such fresh thinking makes me feel rare and precious, and this book can be read by my children. Seeing the end of the second round of dungeons, there are climaxes one after another, which makes people feel excited and unable to calm down for a long time. Qidian has not had a book that can make people's eyes brighter for a very long time. Seeing such a fresh book really makes me feel that there are not enough online articles. The author writes well and maintains your characteristics. I'll order everything once it's on the shelves.

It's interesting, especially the golden finger is actually the unicorn from "Spring and Autumn". The Confucian teachings are subtle and righteous. It's very interesting.

This author is very stupid

I don't mean to expose your shortcomings. I just want to ask, you haven't considered it, where is your failure? First, the reading threshold is too high. Japan was originally a niche in ancient times, but the Warring States Period was better. What do you think of the post-Warring States Period + Nioh Onimusha elements? What you wrote is also very obscure, and the relationships between the various families are entangled. Readers are very reluctant to understand the kinship relationships of these famous names in the Warring States Period. You often test the reader's patience by introducing several paragraphs of relationships and power. If you don't pounce, who will? Second, the mechanism of action of gold fingers is not clear enough. What is the use of your golden finger? Readers have to guess together with the protagonist, right? Writing dozens of chapters is nothing more than a small statement, and it shows off that you are a bit powerful. Do you think it is very powerful and interesting? You might as well just give the protagonist a Ghost Cage Hand, and it will be strengthened by killing monsters. At least you can gain some popularity as a Ghost Warrior. Third, character creation failed. Does the protagonist have any outstanding character? Are there any stereotypes left in the supporting cast? Even the villain who wants to change his body due to "greed" and "jealousy" is more recognizable than the protagonist. Fourth, pretending is a failure. The protagonist is showing off, someone needs to be shocked, someone is jealous, someone is greedy, someone is afraid... In short, the emotions and eyes of all the people in the audience should be on the protagonist. That's how cool it comes! Think about it, if it's your first time downloading a dungeon, will the audience be qualified? Is there an audience for the protagonist to solve the villain's transformation? The protagonist is writing a book for the second time. Are his teammates qualified? Fifth, procrastination. The rhythm should be getting faster and faster, why are you getting slower and slower? ... There are too many questions, so I will just write these for the time being, withdraw, and see you again in the world.

Can this be classified as history? ? ? Editor, are you serious? ? ?