Douluo: Wuhun Lone Bamboo, Hunting the Time Traveler

1: Nowadays, few Douluo have the brains and the strength to dare to mock Yu Xiaogang and Tang San crazily. They really don't regard Yu Xiaogang and Tang Hao as human beings. When they meet the protagonist, their IQ will be reduced by 100%, which is worse than Tang San's bet. Outrageous 2: He scolds Tang San for being double-standard every day. The protagonist he writes is more double-standard than Tang San➕Tang San, and the character he writes is more pure and innocent than Tang San. Anyway, there are excuses, and you won't admit that you are a villain? 3: The beast martial soul has a bit of dragon blood, and all the hundred thousand year soul beasts will bow to you. Emperor Tian will directly become a loyal eunuch, Gu Yue will be your little wife 4: The protagonist's group is all the light of righteousness, and the hostile group is either cunning, cunning, or evil-minded. , You can make conspiracy theories even when you urinate, the protagonist and his gang are all contributing to the world, no matter what heinous things they have done, they can be washed away 5: The battle power collapsed. As soon as I awakened my martial soul, I beat up the soul saint and Contra crazily. I can pick up soul rings that are 100,000 years old, and I can pick up gods at will. Are you a wholesale market? 6: When the heroine meets the protagonist, her face turns red, her legs become weak and she can't walk. All the forces want to recruit the protagonist, and no one wants to kill the protagonist 7: You must steal the Blue Silver Emperor. Just steal it if you say you want. Why do you call yourself a great sage? Tang Hao put him in the cave to prevent the Blue Silver Emperor from resurrecting. It is only natural for you to absorb him and help the Blue Silver Emperor escape from the sea of ​​fire? Can't you say that you are a villain and just want to steal to become stronger? And Tang Hao, is it so easy to steal something from a titled Douluo? The first part about picking up corpses in this book is acceptable, but the second part is a bit far-fetched, but it's okay, just obscene and developed, and there are a lot of typos. There are a few typos in the chapters of Lin Yuan and Lin Tian. The author should correct them

A suggestion to the author, it is best not to create an original time traveler. The quality of Douluo time traveler should be the worst among all time travellers. And there are so many of them, it is recommended that each time traveler has a fan prototype, and then the logic of the script should be based on that of the fan. The materials are all ready-made.

There are also people who engage in multi-story plots. In the Myriad Worlds System book, the beginning of Chapter 16 is non-text and made up, and then the main text. The protagonist and Xiao Wu are still in a hostile relationship, which can be brought into this book. What's more, most fan authors write based on readers' preferences. The relationship between the characters in each book will be different. Same, just like QQ wants to read more female protagonists, here it wants to see no female protagonists, the author will be scolded no matter what he writes If this lets you know that most of the prototypes of Douluo female characters are men in real life, then don't you want to break out and say that those who write Douluo fanfics and those who read Douluo fanfics are gay?

The author can be more rigorous and pay more attention to the original work, which is already a lot better than other fan fiction. There are less inner narrations, less jokes, science popularization, and some plots that he thinks are exciting. If he really wants to, just put it in this chapter. Write more about time-travelers fighting original characters, and don't write all about time-travelers For martial arts, you can ask AI, Eastern and Western mythology, mythical beasts, such as: Nidhogg (mutated blue electric tyrannosaurus rex), Beamon (relative of Zhao Wuji), Spiritual Stone Monkey (relative of Li Yusong), Jörmungandr (Dugu Bo), Golden-winged Dapeng (relative of Flanders) , these time-travelers can be arranged as relatives of the original characters, these people can be given more plots, these time-travelers can be made more powerful, and they can be shaped according to historical templates or heroes from other novels, so that these advanced time-travelers can fight with the original characters These people can be advanced time travelers. Don't give advanced time travelers the system. The martial souls are already powerful but they don't know how to play the system. Advanced time travelers should be more cautious, calm, and thoughtful in character, but they should have shortcomings such as lust, greed for money, indecision..., Advanced time travel The character of the author should be rich and diverse. Don't be like the previous one who only thinks about women, otherwise it will be boring In terms of power, in the later stage, one can be super powerful. There is no need to be like other fan fiction where the protagonist is destined to be blessed. Everyone else is mentally retarded. There are so many time-travelers. There will always be a few people who compete with the protagonist. The protagonist must also bring the forces to stand on the same front. The premise is to let other forces see the benefits. Don't let the two sides have no interests and have the same relationship as life and death (both the time traveler and the protagonist). Don't let the time traveler have nothing to do with other people. All the interests go to the side of the time traveler, fighting against the protagonist. Some people will want to fight and others will want to join the protagonist (provided that the protagonist has the means to control the time traveler, such as soul contract, martial soul control, etc.) Collect more talents, build forces, and fight for one Many of the original martial arts spirits are not wanted by anyone. The subordinates usually only become loyal after being trained at a young age. Don't become loyal to the protagonist as soon as you accept the subordinates. Unless there is a future and benefit from following the protagonist, those trained since childhood can be confidants, and the others can be collaborators at most

Author, your previous novel stated that Xiao Wu was pregnant with millions of fetuses. Why do you still write her as the heroine now? If you don't agree with me, I will.

Be cruel. Don't control the big head with the small head in this book. Don't look at beautiful women and you won't be exposed. Then choose to forgive, and then give other people your resources.

Douluo time travelers do not have high IQs. It can be said that in fan fiction (Pirates, Naruto, Dou Po, etc.) There are not many time travelers with high IQs. They are all like gangsters. They ask the system when they have something to do, pick up girls when nothing happens, and they also like to talk about some big principles. The author who wrote it has not read the original work, so he wrote it after reading a few fan works.

Everyone knows that there are many time-travelers, and everyone who has read Gou Dao's novels knows that the law of the Black Forest is still publicized everywhere without absolutely controlling everything. This shows that most of the guest time-travelers do not have normal IQs.

A love curse alone can basically destroy 90% of time travellers.

Author, the ingredients in your book are too complicated. The story of mortals cultivating immortality, bad people, the system, and little fairies are just a big mess.

The plot in the book of Wanjie is not the main text, it is just written randomly, and it has to be told. If you really want to find the plot that has been written before, and even sit in this book, then you don't have to write it. This is the first time I have seen the plot of the book. Then you don't need to read all Douluo fanfics, and the differences in character relationships in each book make it so difficult for you to understand? In the previous book, the relationship was hostile, but in the next book, they can't be strangers, friends, or lovers? The subject matter of this book is really good. Other fans have either changed the sky screen, system story, or character personality. It feels no different from the studio story.

This black and white swordsman is addicted to love and falls in love with Bibi Dong. None of these time-travelers are normal. I don't just fall in love with this woman, I fall in love with that woman. Was he cursed by the God of Love?

There is a grandson of Qingluan Douluo coming to Wuhun Palace, let's call him Fengxi. I already have the Sky Palm Vase, the Emperor's Scale Armor, and the Green Bamboo Bee Cloud Sword, but I still need the Wind and Thunder Wings.

1. How to recruit girls? The protagonist himself does not have a golden finger. If you accept other time-travelers, you will immediately know that you are also a time-traveler. Wouldn't this become a target? 2. And other time-travelers may also attack the women in the original work, right? The protagonist just accepts the broken shoes? 3. It would be boring to say that this book has a single female protagonist or no female protagonist.

Don't you feel good about torturing Huo Yuhao and Tang Wulin? Dou Yi is ruined now. Nothing cool

Qian Renxue

Xiao Wu, one of the greatest scenes in Douluo Continent

I don't even dare to read what you write, for fear that it will be unfinished.

Who was the first to say that Qian Renxue was the most beautiful woman in Douluo? 🙂I feel that this old lady Bo Saixi is more beautiful than Qian Renxue😁

The subject matter of this book is quite interesting, and the main character does not have the flamboyant personality and the control of the big head by the small head like the previous books, nor does he always imprison the small anus, his eyes are red, and he is panting. Tang San in Dou Yi is very annoying, but he is far less inappropriate than Dou Er. The most important thing is not to forget the nesting dolls. After killing one time traveler, ten more time travelers pop up. The three left now are enough. Any more will cause aesthetic fatigue.

Dugu Yan

There are too many elements, there are already 5 time-travelers now, it's too aesthetically tiring.

No, then if you put it on the shelves, you will get more updates. Why isn't there a chapter?

With the efficiency of the protagonist's control of the sky bottle, it takes almost two years for a fairy grass to grow. (Calculated based on ten thousand years based on the age of the grass jelly) If you add in the tenfold increase of the two eyes of ice and fire. Just two months. Two years and a hundred thousand year soul beast.

There are so many time-travelers that the protagonist of the novel's plot is too busy. Moreover, there are too many new time traveler characters, and the sense of substitution in the novel is quite confusing. It is not easy to integrate into the plot of the novel when reading.

I've just written this little bit and there's a short play.

I suspect that the protagonist's plug-in is luck. No one else has this kind of luck.

I wanted to watch it at first, but unfortunately I didn't want to watch it after seeing that the heroine had Xiao Wu

The second direction of the evolution of the martial soul is Blue Ice Flame. It seems that Dugu Bo has been killed, and his snake gallbladder should now be called Dragon Pill. After being refined, it has two properties: ice and fire.

This time it is really a test of imagination, because several time travelers are fighting here, and now it is like a dark forest. Whoever shows up first will be exposed, and will die easily. If you don't expose yourself, you will die quickly if you step on the minefield to provoke Yu Xiaogang, provoke Tang Hao, and directly run into him to seek death. But now the protagonist's bamboo spirit has added attributes, and I don't know how he will continue to strengthen it later. Is it possible to strengthen it through multiple elements and get stronger with each fight? To be honest, when I first heard that it was a bamboo spirit, my first reaction was that it would eventually evolve into six pure bamboos, but the author's idea shall prevail. After all, compared to Wuhun, the highlight here is definitely the time-travelers whose brains are about to be knocked out. The death of Lin Tian caused a lot of people to come to ask for news nearby. Who knows if there are any time-travelers secretly who didn't come to the door but still received the news?