Notes of the Holy Angel

Take, for example, the currently top-ranked female-oriented novel, "Unscientific Beast Taming." Its opening scene features a protagonist who transmigrates to this beast taming world and incorporates elements of the college entrance examination. It's similar to Crow's book, "No Tribulation During College Entrance Examination," which has some humorous and quirky elements. Now that you're writing about indigenous people, there are many things that are difficult for them to relate to, and the sense of immersion will be slightly weaker. Okay, let's get back to the main topic. How to enhance the tension of the protagonist. It's actually quite simple; all you need is for the person to have enough distinctive characteristics. For example, Blaif likes to turn all the people he hates into ugly frogs. When the second female lead tries to make things difficult for him, he can either use the rules to his advantage or break them while adhering to them to create some humor. The protagonist is supposed to be aloof from men, but in reality, he has a harem of 3,000 beauties. (It's not that I don't love them; I just want to give every boy a home.) Or it could be the kind of action-packed game where you fight a battle and then realize you only have so little loot, so you sneakily steal some from the corpses. This kind of game is about taking whatever small advantage you can get, and even if you don't have anything, you'll still grab it by force.

Blair, a very unique name.

I only read the first chapter, and I thought it was alright, but I felt the characters were a bit stereotypical. If Blair could have more dramatic tension (for example, if she had a clear motivation, or if the misfortune she suffered made it unforgettable for her), it would have been better. P. S.: It's pretty good, just a bit bland.