
In the World of A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Shop My Way to Immortality in the Myriad Heavens Mall
人在凡人:诸天商城购物成仙
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 68k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
30Chapters
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Reader comments 4
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You can give up at the beginning. There is a Zhutian Mall. There are no skills in it. In the end, you need to practice the Qingyuan Sword Art. You have to say that this skill is not very naughty, so you insist on joining Han Li.
I'll be the first person to say that since the author is invincible, he shouldn't write about being afraid of Old Demon Han! You can treat them as colleagues! Just a double star mirror is already awesome! If you return the favor to both ends, you will probably be criticized.
Suggestions
Author, since you read the book review, you probably want to write it well, so I specially give you some suggestions from the reader's perspective 1. Don't talk about anime based on anime, and don't read the original work. You need to understand the paying group of Qidian. Most of them read the doujin based on the original work. At the starting point, there are definitely more original fans than anime fans. 2. In novels about cultivating immortality, don't imitate anime and forcefully express emotional lines. Animation can adapt one or two chapters for dozens of minutes. How much ink can you put in the novel? Male channel cultivating immortality is not romance cultivating. 3. Try not to use licking the heroine as a motive for behavior, and don't let external factors become absolute factors. When you redeem the Tiger Talisman and emphasize Xin Ruyin, at least half of the 100 Qidian readers will be discouraged.
If you want to read it, read Chapter 10 first and then read it if you can accept it. It disgusted me so much that I rarely had the thought of killing the protagonist.