1645: The Fourth Calamity Descends Today

There is too much nonsense in the narration, accounting for half of it. In addition to the trash talk from the players, there are only a few paragraphs of useful information. Not all characters need monologues, and there is no need to keep mentioning the general direction. It's too long-winded, and nothing else matters. Players must also control it. Not everyone only knows how to play games. People vary greatly from one person to another. Some are great at playing games, and some are good at calculus in their teens!

My feelings after seeing the latest chapter 1. What is the ratio between the player's game time and real time? It can't be 1:1. The time on the map of a large game cannot be the same as the ratio in the normal world. It is normal for players to have high interest in the game and play dungeons for several hours. However, it takes the player most of the day to walk like the protagonist. I dare not say all of them, but how many players are interested in this? 2. The resurrection CD is 60 seconds, well... You have to wait 60 seconds to die once, and you have to run back. The players here have no health bar. People died everywhere in the hell in the late Ming Dynasty, and the disharmony of the bloody scenes would most likely frighten many players into sickness. Not all players were phobic, not to mention that players were not strictly screened when choosing the protagonist. 4. The pace was too slow and the content was overdone. Compared with the previous book, the situation was a little better, but only a little better. There was still too much text.

There are more than 50 chapters, and it's hard to keep up with the plot progression.

I feel that the biggest contradiction in the real-life fourth natural disaster is boredom. Work cannot be done overnight. It takes a long time to walk to the next village, and two or three days to go to the township. Which player can endure this loneliness.

Introducing the player Gaolianghe Che Shen, a long article has been written. Can you keep the core meaning of hating Tatars and killing Tatars, and then make it simpler?

Fourth Natural Disaster Battle Flag

I read this book before. The fourth natural disaster army needs pieces of meat to resurrect the army. They fight in the front and collect the corpses later. There are more than 10,000 players in 2 million words. It took 600 chapters to conquer a big country. Almost all the men are dead.

Generally speaking, it is the player's sense of immersion. Players basically have no sense of immersion when playing games, and they just play games for the sake of playing games. Although when being captured by the enemy, the communication triggered the player's emotions of hatred between the country and the family. The player can also be very passionate and say some very strong words to the enemy... But there was no emotional foreshadowing before, so the atmosphere seemed inexplicably abrupt, and it was a bit awkward to take a closer look. In fact, the description of players' communication dialogues and thinking logic can be written more realistically and down-to-earth, and the results will definitely be better. For example, those who write about Naruto fanfics are basically about increasing their combat power. Wars are fought every day, and they rarely write about daily life. Readers have no feelings for the characters, and their perception is already tired.

He was treated so poorly by the Ming court and did not regard the protagonist as a human being. When the protagonist got older and Chongzhen married him, he really regarded Chongzhen as his father-in-law😤, and he still hesitated to become a loyal minister of the Ming court😁

It feels like there is some progress compared to the previous book, and I have put some effort into player ecology. I hope you will put more effort into player portraits in the future.