
A Konoha Ninja with a Gear Build, Starting with Heartsteel
木叶装备系忍者,从心之钢开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 394k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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125Chapters
218Votes
524Recs
10.4kFans
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What a show
Setting up a descendant of Thousand Hands, whose name is Gu Han is too dramatic. If the protagonist were a commoner, I would simply ignore your question.
Akaashi's book was criticized for more than ten chapters because the protagonist used the sage mode to reincarnate inorganically and added a bunch of blood successors to achieve an ordinary kage-level combat performance.
You have 6,000 layers of heart steel to beat a ninja school student to stagger, which is unbelievable.
There is something wrong with your book. Why do you read less and less of it?
Also, why is your book full of words? It gives me a headache!
See for yourself
If you want to ask who this opponent is, well, he is a new student at Ninja School.
I can't stand it anymore, all the protagonists feel sad inside. After stacking 2000 layers, they can be slapped by Kid Kai and it hurts. It's not like attacking, and then their physical strength is worse than before.
Did the author write female videos before?
Do you understand if you hit a school student with 6,000 layers of steel and only take two steps back?🙂
Have you considered the audience for your book?
First of all, it is a Naruto fanfic, and then the protagonist's first piece of equipment. From the introduction, the core equipment is Heart Steel. It can be said that the main elements of your novel are Naruto + lol, right? So what kind of reader group will click in to read your book? Age? Gender? Reading volume? Family situation? Have you considered any of this? The main character's name is Gu Han. I read the first five chapters and it should be Gu Minghan. I've been thinking about it. The Chinese name is just Chinese. Then I looked at the post and saw that he is from the Thousand Hands clan. The author also said there was foreshadowing! ? Good guy, you didn't mention the protagonist's family situation in the first five chapters. I assumed he was an orphan. Then you said his name was a foreshadowing and he didn't have a family. What are you lying about? At the beginning, the results of the entrance exam came out after 3 months. In my opinion, Konoha is really doomed and hopeless. Then, Metkai has no father. The protagonist follows Metkai every day to watch others train, but he does not exercise at all until he fails. The protagonist also said that he liked "Soldier Assault" in his previous life. Your protagonist is an orphan and a salty fish. What does it have to do with "Soldier Assault"? The written plot assumes that readers have watched Naruto and played LoL, which means that those who have watched it and played it can make up their own minds, but those who have not watched or played it should not come, right? Opening an external belt can almost directly upgrade the Heart of Steel, and then the basic attributes are directly different from the original version. If you really can't create your own equipment, why bother with the Heart of Steel? I still have to spar with Kai. The 1000-layer Heart Steel is already flying in the sky just by wiping it on his finger, right? Have you really thought about how to write a book?
It's too hung up. I really can't figure it out. How can you continue to fight when you know that the other side has people who can kill 20,000 ninjas? Aren't you afraid that the other person will come to your house and have a fling?
The author will write after watching Naruto. No, take a look at the 2-hour summary. Site B has a lot of videos.