Naruto: Random Flying Thunder God? Snatching the Dark-Dark Fruit

The idea is good, but too wordy. The first dozen or so chapters are all nonsense. In one sentence, I am a Jonin, and Mikoto loves me, so I give it to me for free, and then I fly to another world by playing Thunder God. And this content took a long time to write for more than ten chapters.

There is no dark fruit in the three golden chapters, but it is all about Mikoto. The first 10 chapters don't have any golden fingers or cool feeling. What do you think?

The Dark Fruit can be fused with other people's fruits, and other people's fruits can be extracted with bloodline factors. Does that mean that the Dark Fruit can be used to fuse other people's bloodline abilities? Uchiha Senju

This book gives me the feeling that it wants to use cheat codes but doesn't dare to. I wouldn't say anything about the Flying Thunder God Technique allowing time travel, but the problem is the protagonist doesn't dare to use it. You can travel, fine, that's your talent as a transmigrator, but you need the Flying Thunder God Technique to activate it.

Steal and run? The protagonist isn't that strong; what about his clone technique or shadow clones?

She's mentally challenged; she feels she has to explain everything to others, even obtaining the Dark-Dark Fruit, which she had to tell Minato and the others, even though she didn't have to.

Sasuke's mom, Naruto's mom... What are you trying to do? The romantic subplots are so abrupt and awkward; I only like the main characters.

The recent plot developments are like 💩 (a Chinese internet slang term for something disgusting or awful).

Putting aside the fact that you've been dragging this out for so long, you've already gotten together with the most beautiful woman in the Uchiha clan, and then you turn around and act all high and mighty, slapping the Uchiha clan in the face. This is practically elbowing the cerebellum with the brain! And you even share a master with Jiraiya? A Naruto fanboy, are you the child of prophecy? 😅

They clearly have the ability to overturn the system, yet they still engage in rule-playing with those who have conflicting interests. Neither weak nor strong