Tokyo: An ACGN Master, Starting with Manga

Why, I renovated the book and put it in the library at noon and couldn't find it. . .

Half of the content is self-talk, and the inexplicable jokes make it very tiring to watch. Many of the jokes are completely out of place, and forcing them into the plot will only make people feel confused, like a child talking randomly. The dialogue is like a human-machine dialogue. Everyone feels that it is a dialogue with some kind of mission. The purpose of all speech is to achieve the final goal, rather than the dialogue and exchange of normal people. It is very uncomfortable to watch and cannot be thought about at all. Including the pen name of the protagonist, it is simply a combination of one word chosen by each of the creators. If it can be read like a normal name and read smoothly, then it is indeed an ingenuity. But it's called [Mayuan Mo Shuming], and then everyone calls it Teacher Mayuan Mo Shuming. I can't even pronounce the name in one breath while typing it, and my tongue twists and turns eighteen times when I say it. Don't you think it's inappropriate? Can you give priority to serving the plot, and then develop your small ideas on this basis? Also during the review period, I started to play the joke about the spell to fight back for no reason. I still use the spell to fight back as a language package, but look at whether it is suitable for your situation. Does this editor lady have this kind of character? Let her have this kind of inner os, and using it randomly without considering the plot and character will only make people feel very baffled. Finally, the selection of works is good. The author has a certain taste and is more innovative than Five Centimeters per Second, but the writing style and character creation are Dafen, the Dafen among Dafen. The writing fluency is also great. Fortunately, the traces of AI are not very obvious. There may be some polishing, but it is definitely not an AI creation. Overall, I can only give 3/10, 1 point for the work, 1 point for the hand rub, and 1 point for encouragement.

I simply can't imagine that I wasn't the first person to read your book after you wrote it The first time you felt happy about being read was not me The first time you seriously read the review was not me The first time you rewarded it was not me The first person you read was not me Your first reader was not me I am just a stingy and vicious person, and I cannot think that you have given all the good things you have to others. Meeting you is a race, I must outrun others

The author's writing is very good, and I hope you will continue to work hard. I hope you will become a great master, your writing will get better and better, and you can keep writing in the future!

Have you read Mr. Hai Hai's absolutely amazing work? I think you can learn from it. The author has a lot of jokes, and there are also many settings. One page that looks full of water is the content of other books. . . , And I hope the author can come on! I haven't written much novels, so my words are for reference only.

The author will add character cards only when the heroine appears in the plot. Each field has a corresponding heroine.

I think it's mid-to-high-end, it's too classic and common, and there's no interesting plot. I'll probably give it up once it's on the shelves.

Trying everything, it feels like an extravagance. Comics, novels, music and games. How many industries have you entered? Can't you just enter two or three?

It would be great if there were five times in life In this case, I would be born in different cities five times Eat different food five times until full Engage in different professions five times And five times... Like the same book

All I can say is, beware of those among book friends who call it "Long Live Understanding"