Across the Multiverse: My Chat Group and Endless Talents

Honestly, seeing this kind of synopsis makes me lose all courage to even look at the table of contents. Knowing the plot is already a cheat, having a chat group is a double cheat. And then you get two more cheats—you're practically a quadruple cheat!

"Devour" is a verb, but it's preceded by a person. This kind of word is indicative of a failing grade in elementary school Chinese.

Isn't the scope a bit too large? Also, it would be best to modify those scriptures that are used directly, making them more compatible. Or, to put it in advance, it should be mentioned that it is not subject to cosmic limitations.

Can you do something that the protagonist of another system-based game can't?

The "Perfect Trilogy" worldview is purely a figurative, idealistic style that emphasizes expressing inner spirit and subjective emotions. The author of "Swallowed Star," on the other hand, is a true realist; he has a science and engineering background, and realism advocates for the objective and truthful depiction of things.

If you wait until you write several chapters in detail for each member of every chat group, believe me, the readership of your book will basically be gone.

I wrote this in a bit of a rush and the descriptions aren't very detailed. It would be better if the descriptions were more detailed.

At the current writing pace, three or four thousand words a day, taking a week to write one plot point—who can stand that? Everyone should just wait until it's finished before reading. It's impossible to follow along. If you're going to write less, you need a tighter plot; if you want filler, you need more. But you've got both filler and less filler. Just look at the table of contents; there's absolutely no desire to subscribe.

My first impression was that the talent "Bring Your Own Bottled Water"? Interesting. Let's take another look. Oh, so it's "Bring Your Own Spring Water"? That's boring.

It's too fast; and there are too many people running around doing business and becoming managers in other countries.