The Long Road

Writing this kind of classical fairy tale article is easy to get started with but difficult to master. Why do people like to read this kind of articles? It's not for the strange monsters and evil spirits, or for the same pretense and slaps in the face. It's about the sincere emotions of the characters that happen in various strange stories. That's why I say Golden Jasmine is the best written. Because he describes the interactions between people very realistically. There is no problem with the outline of this book, and there is no problem with the construction of the worldview. The most important thing about the classical fairy tale is Hun'er, which is generally written. "Water Margin" 108 generals. Everyone is different. The same goes for writing articles. You can't always be looked down upon, and then show off your power, and then people will "look up and worship." This is one of them. Secondly, the protagonist must not only be evil, but also have the greatest enthusiasm for ordinary people and good people. Big mistakes have big penalties, small mistakes have small penalties. As a simple analogy, if you have an 80% favorable impression of someone, you can respond with a 100% favorable impression. But for someone who has a 10% or 20% favorable impression of you, you can't show a 100% favorable impression. (My analogy is inappropriate, but you can understand the meaning.) The current protagonist, in my opinion, does not have a main soul. How to put it, it's like a student who has just stepped out of society. Everyone is a teacher, and everyone with high or low achievements is a teacher. There is no humanity, and the protagonist who has no humanity is a failure in creation.

The anchor can't guarantee that it will be updated twice a day, but at least he can guarantee that he will never be a eunuch and will definitely finish it! The newcomer's new book has been encouraged and recognized by the big guys, so as long as anyone here is still reading it, the anchor will never be a eunuch! ! ! But here's the problem. The anchor didn't save the manuscript, and he was actually very busy during the day. Basically, the novel could only be typed after going back to the dormitory at night. Most of the time, it was finished before 12 o'clock, and it was posted before there was time to polish and revise it (otherwise, it would be discontinued😫), so I would often revise and polish it after it was published, and I apologize to all of you who are following the update! ! ! I will prepare to save the manuscript when I have enough time in the future. The situation will be much better by then, probably... Finally, I wish all readers a happy day! ! !

It's a rare non-travel novel, so I must collect it. But this magic practice is too fast, right? Success in one day?

Is Heaven a Heaven in this world, or is it a Heaven in many realms? The earth god should be considered the heavenly god system, so is the level of Lingxu Guan weaker than, stronger than, or equal to the heavenly god system? 1. Weaker than: Is it said that the ancestors of Lingxu were able to sweep away enemies from outside the world? 1.1 What if Lingxu is a great sect? So is it a self-sweep or a decree-sweep? 1.1.1 If it is a self-sweep, then the end result of the completion of a large sect in a certain area should involve competition for resources and the suppression of others to cause this situation 1.1.2 If it is a follow-up scan, then the end result is either a ruthless decree or someone's suppression 1.2 What if Lingxu is a large sect in a certain area? So is it generally the order of the emperor, the sect, or the emperor? Later, it should still involve competition for resources and suppression by others to cause this situation From this: it should be a revenge situation that is more difficult to bypass the competition for resources and suppression by others Having few real cultivators nearby can only mean that the area is small or remote, so can it be inferred that the country is a small country (there may be multiple countries and big countries) In the past, Lingxu was at least considered a large sect, so it is impossible for you to be friends with all the sects in the future To sum up: it needs to be graded. Determine the map and sect level

The story telling is relatively good, and the mission shaping is also good. It's just that the number of words is too small, and the map hasn't been expanded very much, and it's still wandering around in small places.

The character design is in place, but the training system of Pig's Feet feels messy, and there is no sense of getting stronger through training.

Taoist friends from all walks of life, Immortal Lord Longzun God Emperor... The correct way to keep a book is to click on the latest chapter every day (stay for 30 seconds)! The seedlings in this book have small waists and may snap as they are raised... With a plop, they knelt down for everyone (kneeling three times and knocking nine times)

After reading that the author said there was no outline, I suggested that the author should write a little outline. After reading 82 chapters, I found that some of the chapters written by the author were quite messy.

I tipped 109 points and hope to get two more

🎬 Plot: I think it's pretty good ✒️Writing: The writing is good and the taste is there 🎭 Personality: Steady and firm in seeking the truth Come on, the author is optimistic about you, I will follow up and invest in you.

I hope that the realm of spiritual practice can be like Journey to the West or Apotheosis of the Gods. It's best not to apply the crappy settings of Yuanying Transformation God, which will make you roll your eyes every time in the early, middle and late stages.

Finally, I saw a new book that does not involve time travel and is systematic. It has been put on the shelf. The author's writing style and control are almost boring. I suggest you read Senior Liang Yusheng's work. I feel that it is similar to the author's style. Personally, I understand that group images revolve around things rather than people. This is the biggest difference from ordinary online articles.

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When will the author publish it?

The whole story looks a bit familiar, I have vaguely seen it before,,, is the eunuch reborn?

It is recommended to write about becoming the Jade Emperor and creating heaven.

What a great book! The writing skills are profound!

It's well written. Don't be a eunuch. You should also write your first book well. But it doesn't feel like a newbie.

You can expand your power. After all, you need to revive the sect in the future. You can focus on the disciples. The protagonist feels a bit like an invincible writer.

It looks good, I love watching it, the storyline is very good, ✒️Writing: Good 🎬 Plot: wonderful 🎭 Personality: plain, firm, broad

It's really okay, but I don't know what will happen next. No matter what, you must stick to it. Once you develop your own writing style and writing habits, writing and thinking will be like opening the floodgates. At least judging from the writing of the article, you must have worked hard, so you must stick to it 🤭

How many heroines are there? Single and multiple nothing

It's been a long time since I've seen such an orthodox novel about immortality with awe-inspiring writing style. I'm disgusted by all the stuff about practicing Qi and using medicine to defeat monsters and upgrade.

It's late today, 🙂 came to check in

Are these chapters related to the plot?

✒️Writing style: Remarkable, but not literary. 🎬 Plot: The beginning is suspenseful and exciting, and the follow-up world view is worth looking forward to 🎭 Character design: The beginning of the last disciple of the inheritance, the Golden Finger Master Order, the character design of traditional fairy novels

Very good, come on, come on, come on!

Not bad, very tasty, a piece of grass jelly

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

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