Douluo: the Jade Bone Contains Light, Hex Chooses Three Out of Five

... Let me ask you, with twin martial souls and ultimate attributes, you told me that you only have level seven soul power? Also, what does it mean to be cautious when smiling in Douluo, and what does it mean to be beautiful in the forest and be destroyed by the wind? Are you kidding me? This is how writing was done hundreds of years ago. Nowadays, when writing about Douluo fans, it comes in whatever way feels good and interesting. It would be better for you to go backwards.

I'm not saying this, this book is the most unsatisfying fan fiction I've ever read. I didn't see the strength of the protagonist in co-writing You Goldfinger. I did see his selfless dedication. All the protagonists have evolved. The only one who is invincible is himself. But I didn't see it. As he improves to such an extent, everyone he follows becomes the protagonist, and he himself becomes a plug-in for others. I don't even know who the protagonist is. As you wrote, the twin martial souls' innate soul power is not strong, but the Hex feeling is strengthened a bit. Then I got other plug-ins, all for relatives and friends around me. Are you writing about the protagonist or about my relatives? I became the outsider of the people around me. I understand what the hell this kind of fan writing is. It really makes people who read the book very uncomfortable. It is not outstanding. Big, but it highlights him. His Dafa highlights a built-in humanoid plug-in of relatives and friends. Everyone around him is anxious and anxious. All the urgent branches and lights are activated, even surpassing him as the protagonist. I would like to ask you, the author, what kind of ghost is he writing about? What do you think when you write this? You put all your halo on the relatives and friends around him. Do you think there is a protagonist in this thing? The halo has completely overwhelmed me, you know? Is this how you write fan fiction? Even if others don't write fan stories or copy them, you're not so overbearing. Everyone around you is overpowering the protagonist, you know? What you wrote is really embarrassing for people, and they don't even know who the protagonist is. It has become a cheat for the people around them, right? I am not outstanding at all, but I seem to be ordinary, but I am playing cheats for all kinds of people around me. Look at what you have done. I am really speechless. I really should stop writing. Your book is useless. Look at how many people are reading the discussion. People are saying that you are going backwards. I think you are doing this. It's written for others to feel disgusted with. Nothing stands out. There is no main character, so it's nothing. Instead, it's used to open cheats for others. It's really cool. It's disgusting and makes readers feel uncomfortable watching it 🤫🤫😤😤