Why Does My Cultivation Intel Look Like Game Notifications?!

Author, the conflict you wrote is a bit incomprehensible. You wrote earlier about how powerful the human emperor is and how the status of monster beasts is not high, so there is a so-called monster that acts as a licking dog and licks the protagonist, and then another monster comes and attacks the protagonist regardless.

After reading it, it is quite interesting but has some shortcomings. First of all, the most important realm issue, since it has been simplified to four realms, then these four are the main ones. You use Condensation Pill and the like too frequently, which is far less simple and clear than practicing Qi Transformation Essence. It is recommended to optimize the realm description. The content looks a bit messy and it is best to optimize the layout.

Cultivation has become widespread. I don't believe there aren't things like soul splitting and thought severing. Soul splitting might be unsafe, but the thoughts that can be projected can definitely be used as AI. For example, a Nascent Soul cultivator could sever a thought, then attach it to a low-level spiritual treasure as AI, and have the treasure deliver packages.

It feels like a very boring world, with a rigid social environment. The Heavenly Court is too powerful and basically oppresses everyone. The best the protagonist can achieve is a government position. What's the point?

There's way too much dialogue, especially when the protagonist doesn't have many skills, yet there's always a test or critique. It's all dialogue, and there's even talk of comforting the protagonist... It's unbearable... Every battle should be meant to showcase something new, otherwise, don't go into so much detail.

To be honest, after reading it for a while, I felt that the first chapter contained a lot of information, and it took me quite a while to read. However, I think it might be due to the author's paragraphing or something 🙂. For example, the realm, the protagonist's cheap father's marriage into the family, and the protagonist's sister helping her father get married into the family—it all left me a bit confused.

The protagonist is making fun of each other while being bitter and resentful at the same time, which is a bit disconnected...

She's already put herself in the picture for you to choose from, and you still won't choose?

To be honest, the conflict came out of nowhere.

It feels like the world of the Mahayana stage. Is Emperor Jiang still around?