Why Does My Cultivation Intel Look Like Game Notifications?!

Author, the conflict you wrote is a bit incomprehensible. You wrote earlier about how powerful the human emperor is and how the status of monster beasts is not high, so there is a so-called monster that acts as a licking dog and licks the protagonist, and then another monster comes and attacks the protagonist regardless. According to your own design, it has been patched for so long, and this set of rules has been in operation for so long, don't you think it's a little strange that there is an idiot like that bear?

After reading it, it is quite interesting but has some shortcomings. First of all, the most important realm issue, since it has been simplified to four realms, then these four are the main ones. You use Condensation Pill and the like too frequently, which is far less simple and clear than practicing Qi Transformation Essence. It is recommended to optimize the realm description. The content looks a bit messy and it is best to optimize the layout.

Cultivation of immortals has become popular. I don't believe there is no such thing as soul splitting and mind splitting. Soul splitting may not be safe, but the thoughts produced by the mind can definitely be used as AI. You can kill a thought like a god, and then install it as an AI on a low-level spiritual treasure, and then directly let the spiritual treasure deliver the express. I think there is nothing wrong with this. If the version has just been updated and has not been created yet, I feel The protagonist can absolutely do it. After he grows up, he can set up a company alone. When he harvests resources, he can do this. When he trains to fight against the virtual, he can express his own ideas. Then when he uses the AI drone, he can just deliver express delivery to compete with similar Wanbaolou, or compete in the food business industry, or he can join Pinduoduo for express delivery.

It feels like a boring world, and the social environment is already very rigid. Heaven is so powerful that it basically oppresses everyone. The best way for the protagonist to survive is to join a group. What's the point?

What should I say, after reading it for a while, I felt that there was a lot of information in the first chapter. It took me a long time to read it, but I feel that it may be a problem of the author's segmentation 🙂, such as realm, and the main character's cheap father getting married, and the main character's younger sister helping his father get married, which made me a little confused.

The proportion of dialogue is a bit too much. Especially when the protagonist has no means, he has to give a test review. It is all dialogue and he has to comfort the protagonist. It is unbearable... Every battle should be to show something new. Otherwise, don't write it in detail.

She put herself in and let you choose, but you didn't choose

To be honest, the conflict came out of nowhere.

Not bad, let's look at one piece of food and grass now.

It feels like the world of the Mahayana period. Is Emperor Jiang still there?

7.5/10 The setting is not new, but it is very interesting It does not deliberately suppress the development of the protagonist The protagonist is not a waste, he has talent, temper and pursuit Let's see how the author handles the interpersonal relationships of the protagonist in the future. If he handles it well, it should be able to reach a higher level.

After reading it, the creativity is OK, but the story is a bit old-fashioned. Is it a new author? The writing style is a bit average, do you need AI to polish it?

Wow, that's quite interesting. Watch the follow-up🙂🙂

Good looking, come on author😆

If you have any comments or suggestions, please mention them in this post. I will definitely read them.

Why does this setting look familiar? The guy who wrote about the updated information on the beast-controlling version, and the one who wrote about insects, had a similar routine to yours.

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The subject matter is interesting

Well, I haven't seen this kind of chapter one in a long time.