Swallowed Star: An Equipment Slot from the Start

Do all apprentice-level buffs have to decay? And it's just absorbing energy, not comprehending the law. I don't dare to think about what's going on behind you. I always feel that your equipment column is not as strong as others'? !

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After fighting monsters, who wants to watch the protagonist play house on earth? Also, author, you still don't understand that fists are power, and the protagonist has big fists, so it's easy to build a power or a martial arts gym. It's not that the protagonist goes to cooperate with the country, but the country begs the protagonist to cooperate. You must know that in the original work, Hong is the person with the most force and the most powerful person. If it weren't for Hong, to be honest, humans would have been destroyed by monsters, let alone laser cannons. This thing has great limitations. On cloudy days or digging holes from the ground, it can destroy humans from both inside and outside. In the final analysis, Hong killed the king-level monsters like chopping melons and vegetables, forcing the monsters to negotiate, and preventing the king-level monsters from attacking the base city, so that the remaining population could be defended. So if the secret technique of gold or something is ineffective on the protagonist, then it is of no use in training his subordinates. I personally don't object to the protagonist going to the battlefield, but just don't write the protagonist's status is too low compared to the country. That means don't write the protagonist as a loser.

There are two things about Swallowing the Starry Sky that I actually don't understand. That is, there is a legal slave trade. They are also human beings. As long as it is an uncertified planet, once you find it, it will be your slave force. There are also things like the world of immortality, but it is not so serious. It's okay if it is a low-level one. The highest-level slave force is actually a cosmic level. Another point is the issue of seizing the body. Even the clansmen of the leader of the Universe Kingdom can seize the body. Even if there are enough clansmen, aren't you challenging the majesty of the strong?

It looks good so far. It can remind you to be prepared for the crisis caused by the evolution of animals. Anyway, everyone already knows that RR will improve physical fitness. To prepare for animals, it is necessary to prevent it in advance. The original book said that the number of deaths is not only because of RR, but also because of monsters.

The protagonist is extremely brave on the battlefield. The official must launch the god-making plan, wildly publicize the protagonist's invincibility and the ease of killing lord-level monsters, and let the people know that there are still tall people who can hold up if the sky falls, so that they will not lose hope. This is the most important point. You must know that after the Golden Horned Behemoth was born in the original work, when the king-level monsters were raging, every battle between the council members and the king-level monsters was broadcast live.

The previous writing is pretty good, but the scene where the heroine is critically ill is too intellectually depressing. If this can be refined, the impression will be much better.

One thing I have always emphasized is that cultural workers must be educated and not blindly show off.

It's really boring to think that it can be the sixth force of another clan. There is actually a bug, so just take away the earth and build your own ethnic group of earthlings. Otherwise, we will still be exploited, which will be very miserable.

It's great to watch. In fact, I like to watch Nirvana because it represents the reshaping of order and is based on reality. There is actually quite a lot to write about in the career of a golfer.

There is no need to write some plots. After writing them, I felt that the protagonist was leaning on Tang San 😤

I feel like the protagonist is pretending to be a genius. First, you are not the only genius in this world. Leave it there to patch the original work. Add settings.

The most ridiculous thing about Swallowing Starry Sky is soul slavery. Shouldn't there be such a thing like the mechanical race in the universe?

One thing I don't understand is why is the protagonist so greedy? Why should we take care of both the controller and warrior schools at the same time? Doesn't being distracted by two things lower your upper limit? When fighting monsters, is it possible to control the throwing knife while fighting in close combat? Even Luo Feng is mainly the controller in the early stage. The protagonist has to choose a direction, right? Are you going to be a controller completely, or just a warrior?

The combat power data of the Earth Novice Village is written in such detail. What should I write if the Earth is out of the world? How about changing skins and doing it all over again? The writing was good at the beginning but I felt like there wasn't much room for development later on.

Don't engage in genius battles. If you are engaged in genius battles so long before Luo Feng, then this book is meaningless. Also, don't enter the Thunder World, because it will take many years for the Thunder World to automatically open. Stellar-level Yagen does not have the ability to break through the world master's boundary. It is recommended to create your own opportunities. Don't follow the old path. You can write slowly. Don't equip the Chaos Monument. No matter how you write it, it will be stupid. It is recommended to equip the Beast God Statue, or the original treasure materials such as the Heart of Space and the Heart of Time. You can also equip the Sky Soul Crystal to obtain the Sky Soul Crystal, which resists erasure by the laws of the universe and is indestructible. Such characteristics give people more usefulness than the nine recorded in it. From the original work, at least the Venerable level cannot destroy the Sky Soul Crystal. Equipping the Sky Soul Crystal is equivalent to invincible physical defense in the early stage.

A self-created heroine is worse than no heroine at all. Suppose the heroine in your novel is worse than the ruthless emperor. Why is there no such person in the original work? The correct answer is aunt, at least the readers will have an impression.

There is one thing that puzzles me about the world of Swallowing Starry Sky, and that is that after many strong men were killed or self-destructed, they did not worry at all about being enslaved by their souls after being resurrected by the hostile universe master! ? Many strong men and geniuses blew themselves up and died after being unable to defeat their opponents, and then they would be resurrected collectively by the Lord of the Universe on their side after a long period of time. After those geniuses, King Limit, King Invincible, and Venerable level strong men were killed, you can immediately call the Lord of the Universe over to resurrect and enslave them on the spot! Why do all strong people feel that they are safe and will not be enslaved by their souls when they die?

Since you have decided to be a martial artist and have a spiritual master as an assistant, why do you write so much content about spiritual masters? Moreover, the increase in telekinesis power of a spiritual master has been increased so high. If you ask me, I would just keep practicing spiritual telepathy. Anyway, the paths lead to the same goal, and we all lead to the realization of the law. It doesn't matter whether we are a warrior or a spiritual master. There is one thing to say, the spiritual master does have an advantage, but there is no need to focus on it all the time. After all, there is no essential difference between the two after the planet level. Unless the author plans to write hundreds of thousands of words on the apprentice level, I personally suggest that focusing on the warrior path, the spiritual master is guaranteed to be able to fly and escape from the beast tide. Never write a plot that involves melee combat while using telekinesis to kill enemies, especially don't write a plot that takes time to practice telekinesis. After all, unlike Luo Feng, the protagonist has a spirit ball that can quickly increase the intensity of his mental power. If the protagonist cultivates his own mental power while also cultivating his genetic power, the author would be scolded.

How are you reordering recently? Have you dropped it?

The idea is good, it's rare to write something new, but the writing style is just average.

Your equipment column is a bit interesting! Please don't use the initial universe setting of your last book in your new book! What chaos and imperfection in the laws of the initial universe caused the cultivation of the initial universe to lead to errors in understanding the laws! Really poisonous to death! Come on!

Is it necessary for a fanfic to start from the beginning of the earth to the end of the water? You already know what the plot will be at the beginning. You can write it from the level of domain lord, world lord, emperor, family leader, etc.

First, when the RR virus first started, why didn't we warn the country about the mutation of marine life? If we were prepared a day in advance, we would save a lot of losses. Second: Why should the protagonist find someone to learn martial arts by himself? As long as he reports it and checks the protagonist's physical fitness, the country will know everything. It is still a matter of time. One more day of preparation or one less day of preparation time will reduce the country's losses in terms of human lives and materials. Can you explain it?

Don't accept Luo Feng as a disciple, or you'll be thrown into the street.

What you wrote should be the force multiplier. The amplitude in the original book was created by Hong in the training camp. In the later stage, there is a physical or divine body amplitude. In the early stage of the mental side, it seems to be a force multiplier. In the later stage, there is a soul amplitude. The force multiplier and the amplitude are multiplied together. I remember it is like this.

One thing to say, author, don't you think there is too much foreshadowing? Is it possible that every day of the nine months of Mahanirvana must be filled in? Some things need to be accelerated. Another point to mention is that the author, you plan to exterminate the monsters on land and then focus on the ocean. This is unrealistic. There are too many terrestrial creatures, and they mutate quickly. The outbreak of a beast tide in September does not mean that the monsters will have combat power in September. It is likely that the monsters have already formed combat power three months in advance. Secondly, the monsters on the mainland are not completely wiped out. Many animals have special skills in digging holes, and the main force of the beast tide is also monsters transformed from small animals. Finally, you underestimate the country. The country cannot wait until September to discover the monster problem. It is very likely that the original work was only a month or two late before discovering the problem. Therefore, the land beast tide will definitely break out when it is time to break out, and the intensity will only drop by one level at most.

Why are there so many equipment slots for Swallowing the Starry Sky recently? I've seen three copies.

The author arranged for the protagonist to be imprisoned by Ruin No. 9 At a critical moment. This ancient writing method is somewhat deliberate and has the effect of screening readers.

So far, the author's performance is "fair".