Breaking Through the Heavens in the Age of Declining Dharma

While the plot is commendable, it includes a group of players who might not enjoy the book, especially those who like the Three Kingdoms period. Those who don't like the Three Kingdoms will likely find it difficult to enjoy either, as the first instance is particularly long and tedious. The protagonist is driven by lust, lacks any special abilities, has an inherently unlikable character, and is both incompetent and pretentious.

Keep it up, author! By the way, the protagonist transmigrated and became Dong Zhuo, so if you, the author, transmigrated yourself, you absolutely must become Liu Bei! Uphold the glorious tradition! You absolutely must!

Author, please come back to writing normal Chinese entertainment novels. I really loved "Above the Entertainment Industry" 😍. Write another similar one, just don't teeter on the edge of incest.

If there's a group for Huayu Zhishang, it would be best to mention it there. Also, announcements about new releases for some of the older books should be posted.

If you wrote just a few words about the author of "Hua Yu Zhi Shang" (a popular Chinese entertainment blogger) in the synopsis, I believe that with your reputation, you would attract far more people than just this. 😏

The protagonist is portrayed as incredibly dim-witted. Not only is there no information given about his first life, but he also lived for 46 years in his second life, controlling a multi-billion dollar business empire. How could someone praised by a multi-billion dollar tycoon be so brainless?

The first dungeon is too long and the pace is too slow. It would be best if it ended in about ten chapters, then we could summarize what we've learned, have some fun in real life, and then go back to the dungeon, and then slowly unfold the story later.

After reading just two chapters, I immediately sensed a strong "old-fashioned" feel, the kind of writing style often associated with veteran authors. Clicking on the homepage confirmed it: indeed, the author is an established figure. Otherwise, why wouldn't they keep up with the times and learn something new? After all these years, why would they still write like this?

6/34. The provisions... Are somewhat poisonous. I thought the first three chapters were pretty good, especially the one about "safety first". But suddenly Chapter 4 switched to a dungeon... Never mind.

Keep it up! Never forget Huayu!