My Card Has a Quirk: Tutoring a Noble Young Lady

The setting idea is good, but the pacing is bland. The gameplay of the cards has not been fully explored, and many conflict points have been briefly explored. The character creation is relatively templated, and the aristocratic characters have a heavy sense of routine. Currently, the number of words is limited, the plot progress is slow, and the follow-up needs major improvement.

The main character looks a bit inhuman

🎬 Plot: The first chapter introduces the four characters and the background worldview through a typical opening, but does not introduce the key cards and the role of cheat fingers. 🎭 Character design: The image of the slave merchant who has always been disliked by customers and the picky aristocratic lady are very clear. The aristocratic lady who easily changes her mind greatly destroys the newly established image. With the cards and cheats completely unknown, the charm of the protagonist is the cheat. ✒️Writing: The first chapter plus the introduction in a few words establishes the protagonist's unscrupulous character who regards the entire other world as an object of harvest as other readers have suggested.

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✒️Writing: The author's writing is okay 🎬 Plot: The plot is ridiculous. The first two chapters are full of flaws. The noble buys a new slave from the slave market to send his daughter to school instead of choosing from the original servants. The author does not give a reason. The protagonist helps the businessman with advice, but is still a locked-up slave who can be sold for 1 yuan. On the way, a robber suddenly appeared and died immediately. As a result, there were 5 different professionals, and they were also full of talents. 🎭Character: Inexplicable, blunt

Just be honest and engage in pornography. If you have to solve the case, watching extraordinary people solve the case is the most boring. All techniques can be explained by professional skills. There is no skill at all.

In fact, the description of the writing is okay, but there are too many irrelevant settings. People who are killed by the protagonist will be turned into cards. How many character cards will be obtained in the future? It will become a piece of writing to give feedback on each character card. The various levels of the occult are not written very clearly. I feel that the background and settings can be improved.