You Said You Have to Study Hard to Learn the Mysteries, How Do You Conquer Them?

How should I put it, I didn't learn anything from that demon hunting thing. You can really see the writing skills used, and the misaligned perspective is used well. But people have it all, including reversal of cause and effect, synaesthesia, environmental description, etc., But you are very different in these areas. So the sense of substitution is not good. If you really want to imitate, you can first look at writing theory systematically.

How many heroines is this? 😰

Well written, invested

Yeah, but it doesn't feel much different from other mystics. Bye-Bye.

Come on! I like your way of writing 😁

The concept is the girl, the ritual is the clothes, and the spiritual power is the money. The pig's trotters are handsome but have no money. The old man is not popular with girls but has a lot of money. Is it you? Takumi!

Okay, it's pretty good. It's a more fun setting and still has playability. These concepts are personified, and then with a deeper understanding of the concepts, they become various dressing games. There is definitely a certain sense of anticipation. This is a pretty good cross-border association. And different concepts have different personalities. It's quite rich and quite good.

Your character descriptions are quite interesting. I read a few chapters and the girl who appeared described the small leather shoes and even the morning dew on the toes of the shoes. You are not very good at writing, right? Where did you learn this? You are not self-taught, right? Then the alchemy ritual is also written more vividly, such as salt and other things. Although it is a bit long, I took a few glances and found that the description of this ritual is pretty good. Then what is the main line of book personification? I still don't quite understand this, I can't stand it