
Violent Cultivation of Immortality Starts from the Three Seas of Consciousness
暴力修仙,从三座识海开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 25k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 24d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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After reading the first chapter, I felt something was wrong. The protagonist clearly knows that there is a problem with his senior brother, but still follows him, especially since the protagonist has no means to save his life. Isn't this stupid? The reason why he survives later is purely because the villain just happened to enter the sea of consciousness and was killed by the plot. If the villain directly made the human elixir, it would not be the end directly. This arrangement seems too deliberate and lacks a sense of substitution. The most important thing is that the protagonist is too stupid. The protagonist does not have to be awesome, he does not have to be a genius, and he does not have to be particularly smart, but he cannot be stupid. It would be better to write that the protagonist is about to be killed by the villain when he travels back in time, and then change the villain's method of killing people. Instead of sucking the essence, use the method of sucking the consciousness (soul). This will not be abrupt and cause others to suck the essence, and the protagonist will enter the sea of consciousness. It is too deliberate. Then when the villain enters the protagonist's sea of consciousness, the golden finger arrives and kills the villain. Although this is also deliberate, many authors now use cheats to save the day. Readers are used to it and will not feel it is deliberate. Also, it makes sense for the male protagonist to travel through time and have more seas of consciousness. After all, the male protagonist merges with the soul of the original owner, just like 1+1>2. It makes sense to have three seas of consciousness.