I’m in the Hokage World, and I Can Steal Attributes

The protagonist, Hyuga, is like a slave in the Separation Family and is being oppressed to death. How many readers can be dissuaded by this status? Instead of solving the problem as soon as possible, the clan continues to pressure the protagonist? ? ? ?

What's the point of having to create this point of conflict? What would happen if you just wear the Zong family directly? This kind of forcibly creating conflicts is really very low-level, forcibly raising the difficulty of one's own writing

In how many chapters will the protagonist remove the mark of the caged bird or kill everyone in the clan?

You made such a stupid plan in the first chapter. Don't you know that the Hyuga clan is very closed-minded? Where do you go every day, for what purpose, and for how long? How can you get such freedom? And your actions tend to be friends with Sakumo Hatake. During this sensitive period, your actions are enough for the clan to kill you with the Caged Bird Curse Seal. Even if you specifically look for members of the tribe to spar, and then step by step to spar with outsiders, it will be more reasonable than the current plot. As a Hyuga branch, you can increase your strength, but you are absolutely not allowed to increase your power. Do you think Hyuga Neji's story about his fate is fake? What he does every day is prescribed, this is his destiny.

Why doesn't anyone write about the Hyuga clan? Be bold! It is better to write about the common people than to write about the separation of families. When writing about the common people, you only need to use the will of the third generation of fire! When you write about the separation of the family, you brag about it and even three generations have not dared to use you. When you return home, you have to be a slave, worse than a dog.

The act of directly telling White Fang a story about the future confused me. Reading novels may not require brains, but writing novels requires brains.

Caged Bird Possibly the best mechanic. . . .

I've read a chapter and a half. Regardless of whether the author uses AI or not, it smells like AI anyway.

It is better to write about little Hinata than to write about the separation of the Hinata family.

Liangcaojia, there is something, the article is quite interesting despite being dull, it's okay