I Live in Both Reality and Dreams

The title and setting of this book remind me of Extraordinary Twins

This book has a huge flaw. The first copy is too long. Normally it should be compressed into less than ten chapters.

The introduction to your book is honestly quite enticing and catches the eye, making people want to come in and read it. The setting is not bad, and the dream world and the concept of extraordinary twins are also very good. The problem is that apart from these two attractive points, the rest of what you wrote is just a mess. The first copy can no longer be described as smelly and long. Even if you want to foreshadow it, don't make it so long. You are not a great author. If the foreshadowing is so long, who will pay for it? Including your power system, three or four years is considered fast enough to move from level one to level two, but it will take at least 10 years to reach level three. The problem is that in the real world, there is nothing else except spiritual beings. They are no different from ordinary people. There are also various debuffs such as knowledge blockade. The overall atmosphere of dreaming about travelers can also be described as extremely bad. To be honest, with such a bad atmosphere, I doubt they have caused any large-scale chaos? Overall, this is a very creative book that was delayed.

The story is confusing, the gender is confusing, and halfway through the story, it suddenly changes and I don't know what's going on. It was obviously normal before. This kind of problem appears in the first 8 chapters. If you ask what happens next, enmm.

It is right that you want to write your own stuff, but you have to consider that you are writing novels for readers, and you must consider the readers. If you don't have to worry about food and clothing and it's just your hobby, let's talk about it differently. You have just written 100 chapters, which is fifty days. During this period, neither the dream line nor the reality line events have ended. Life is not easy for everyone these days. Reading novels is just for fun and relaxation. As a result, you haven't finished a single event in 50 days. It's not satisfying, and many readers leave because they can't follow it. In addition, you are a new author, so your reader base is originally small. Great authors are not always right. They have a large readership. As long as they don't write about shocking things, there will always be readers who like them. But you, a new author, are different and should proceed step by step. You don't want to write about such a big event from the beginning, and it's still two-pronged, dream and reality. You should first rewrite a dream line novice copy to attract readers. The reality line should not be so big at the beginning. If you write it big, it will inevitably involve official detailed descriptions, which will inevitably take a lot of space to write, and it will appear a bit superficial. When the readers are not stable at the beginning, it is easy to cause the loss of readers. It is best to slowly pave the way through two or three copies before introducing in-depth official events. After two or three copies, you will also have some abilities to ensure that you can participate, instead of directly participating with a blank slate like now, which is very confusing. After you have a stable readership on the shelves, you can then write some long and complex copy. Finally, I wish the author all the best!

Such a small number of seedlings were brought over by Amway

In fact, the biggest problem is that there are not enough updates

I came here after seeing the notification in the group. Let's take a look.

Can a loser who can't even see the road be the protagonist?

Excluding Qidian official and the author, I am the 9th reader to post. I have become a veteran and follow the author. I have nothing to do with each other. 2026/7/27 The potential number of this book is 187