The Saint Kicks Me in the Head

Just reading the introduction, I suddenly thought that if the story were changed, the first half of the introduction would become a real-life story of xxn running away with a bucket on the day of her wedding to a rich man in order to collect gold coins 😄

First of all, about my view of a book and the subsequent changes, which gave me different standards for this book. I initially thought this was a crazy article. The male protagonist takes back his body, acts like a standard Lezi man, only cares about himself, and then falls into Liz's hands and gets punished. This is nothing, the writing is pretty good, from the Lezi man's point of view. But then the author introduced alchemy materials and Liz's love. I didn't feel too uncomfortable here, but then the author made some jokes (which I thought seemed to be true) about the relationship between the two, and Anna made a promise, hoping that the male protagonist could take good care of Liz. In this way, I look forward to the male protagonist's thinking and change in attitude towards this relationship. This discomfort is amplified in Chapter 49. If you want to write about a romantic relationship, don't write chapter 49 like this - Don't leave me behind. I don't understand that you made a promise before, but ended up breaking the promise. It also had to be written from Liz's perspective that she was not chosen first. The writing was so tragic that it made me think that Liz was not chosen, and my eyes passed over Liz like it was sweeping through the air. I will only hate the male protagonist in this way. Liz just fell in love with a scumbag like this. When Liz sheds tears later, the male protagonist still takes Liz away. In the end, I felt that the male protagonist had no power, but he still hurt everyone except himself. That's not how power is used. The male protagonist uses a pocket watch to prefetch, but in essence he is still very weak, but he is the most cunning or clever to get his own body; Liz has power but does not know how to use it, and has no wishes of her own. Obviously the two are complementary. As for the operation in Chapter 49, I still don't understand why the male protagonist didn't choose Liz immediately. After the time passed, the male protagonist returned to his original state. Is there any way to counterattack the church and various forces? No. The only option was Liz. The setting is really not suitable for writing about love. There can be storms and discord in love. But there should not be any denial of love itself. From the moment Liz's love was taken out and turned into material, the relationship itself was distorted.

Two geniuses struggle with troubled children's love story

Let me also briefly talk about my reading experience of this book. It is similar to what an old man said before. The main reason is that the perspective of the fun person in the early stage and the love line in the later stage made me feel quite separated. At first, the plot of the male protagonist taking back his body and running away secretly was acceptable, but the later writing made me feel a little uncomfortable. Many times it seemed like Liz was willing to give without asking for anything in return, while the male protagonist seemed to deliberately refute the other person's feelings... Maybe the author wanted to create an image of a tsundere male protagonist? I won't comment on this because I don't want to affect the author's thinking, but I don't feel much love from the male protagonist at the moment, so it is still difficult for me personally to bring this into a work of pure love (haha, the author writes about scum quite well 🤓). I will write down my expectations for this book. I hope that the author will try his best to let the male protagonist gradually show his love for Liz without affecting the overall structure of the book. I believe that it is more beneficial to write pure love for the subsequent plot. 😊 Also, should the author consider giving Liz a bath and change her clothes? When I saw Chapter 63, it seemed that Liz was dirty and cold and hungry all the time after being exposed to wind and rain. I felt so uncomfortable just looking at it. It was a bit pitiful. Haha, let's take a hot bath 🤓

Let me post a pin to explain Because I accidentally deleted a post from a reader teacher before. Sorry, I don't have much use of Dian Niang's backend system <(._.)> This book has a single female protagonist. There are many female supporting characters who have disputes with the male protagonist in the early stage, but they are related to the main plot, such as labor disputes, debt disputes, and interpersonal disputes. Maybe it's because I've read less harem stories, so I didn't expect this to cause misunderstandings. I'm sorry that some friends found it awkward, and I'll pay attention to it later. No ambiguous relationship, no ambiguous relationship, no ambiguous relationship (If you think that lifting your head is considered ambiguous, then there's really nothing you can do about it) I She specializes in writing single heroines. Although she is a flamboyant, she basically won't make this kind of mistake That's it, nothing more. If you have any questions, you can leave a message in the post. Please comment lightly. Please, I will really steal the little pearl under the quilt because of criticism😭😭😭 Let me show you the Liz I found

The writing style of this book is acceptable, the details of the characters are vividly depicted, and the interactive plot will make people smile knowingly. It is not the kind of industrial saccharin that is forced on the sweetness, but the sweet and sour taste of love. Some short stories are very effective in showing the characters' personalities. However, it is a pity that the main purpose of this book is a bit weak at present. From a personal point of view, the core of this book is not like the usual men's videos, but more like women's videos or children's literature. The most intuitive point is that the overt main plot of this book is the redemption of the male protagonist (the hidden plot may be mutual redemption of the male and female protagonists, etc.). What sin is atonement for? As an alchemist, the male protagonist took away the feelings of five people in order to cultivate the Philosopher's Stone (for the purpose of resurrecting the master or becoming a god). The female protagonist was the last one he deceived into "loving", so his head was taken off and used as a ball for the female protagonist to kick. Some book friends who have read countless movies should already feel that something is wrong at this point. Let's take a look at what the alchemists who committed major crimes did in the classic works in history Steel forged the land to form a formation, and sacrificed 50 million people to make the Philosopher's Stone Sword and Wind Legend Potter, sacrificed the entire country to become the Hand of God There is also the classic Big Brother, who made his own daughter. At that time, these people were soaking in lava and blowing nbs in hell. The male protagonist said that I had committed a heinous crime. I deceived the feelings of my wife, little brat, elf widow and two other people and made the philosopher's stone. The two in front probably wanted to strangle him to death 😏 This is the problem. The core conflict in this book is private morality rather than righteousness. In male videos, we generally do not take the protagonist's private morality as anything. The big problem is that it is also impossible to agree that a person with good personal ethics can become a god. This is a plot that usually only appears in fairy tales, except for Wang Mang (laughing). Using this to advance the main plot will only become more and more awkward. The male protagonist has been emotionally involved with the female protagonist, but has done nothing bad or good. As a result, his portrayal as a romantic boyfriend is very brilliant. As the real protagonist of a book, a person who has achieved great things and ascended to the throne of God, his image is extremely weak. What's more abstract is that in a few chapters before and after it was released, the author revealed that the male protagonist did not actually take away the female protagonist's love, he took away his own. The male protagonist simply dated the female protagonist for a year, then picked up his pants and ran away the day after they had sex. He neither cheated on her with a mistress, nor defrauded the female protagonist of money, or profited from her status as a saint. He was even a virgin himself, and the female protagonist's first time was also his first. Even after he ran away, he was still thinking about the female protagonist, and he didn't find anyone else. Such a person is regarded as a scumbag who has committed such a heinous crime, and can even become a god immediately after atonement for his sins. It's not that I want to create any gender antagonism. Isn't this setting really funny? I'm afraid that female-channeled novels would not dare to adopt such a setting easily 😄 In contrast, the author has some in the book I wrote a background story in one chapter, which is the template for the male protagonist. I personally think that this template is much better than the current story development of the male protagonist. It is not because he was thrown to the heroine with only his body and had to atone for his sins, or because he kept insisting and was forced to pay by the heroine's suicidal behavior, but because he saw the ruin, felt the love, and the regret that came from it. As a protagonist, the intention is undoubtedly much higher

Why am I not the cream of the crop? My writing is so sexy. Also: Author, you update 60,000 times a day. You update 60,000 times a day. How much do you update every day? 🥵🥵🥵

It looks like I'm trying to trick the whole world🤔

From the big point of view: The story of two people who don't understand emotions redeem each other From the small point of view Three No Straight Balls S×Tough Mouth Tsundere M The author is a seasoned foodie

I originally thought that the plot was about the prodigal son of a veteran in Hua Cong turning back, but it turned out that Xiao Chu Nanchun's heart was moved Isn't the author the same?