Douluo Peerless: the Heart Is the Furnace, and the Bones Hold the World in Check!

{"NickName":"Please give Yasuo to me","UserId":349265774} Author, there is something wrong with your character's age and the way he expresses his martial spirit 1. Let me talk first. The problem with lowering the main body martial soul is that there is no shadow when the main body martial soul first awakens. The heart of the martial soul replaces the original heart. There is no such setting at all. According to what you said, if a full body main body martial soul is awakened, wouldn't the entire body be replaced? At most, it has a little soul power light and a bit of luster. For example, Long Aotian's skin is more jade-like. Except for the two very obvious ones of Lang Ya and Yu Tao, the other legs and hands are just thicker. Besides, the bones are wrapped with leather and tendons, and the bones are inside. How can the naked eye see it? How is it possible that there are bone marks? It is purely redundant to develop bone spurs. Shouldn't bones be enhanced in density and toughness? Wouldn't it be better to practice boxing? 2. It's about age. Huo Yuhao: Entered school at 11 years old, participated in the competition at 12 years old, died at 14 years old, and was destined to be the god of sea at 17 years old Beibei: met Huo Yuhao at the age of 14, participated at the age of 15, died at the age of 17, and died at the age of 20. Fate Zhang Lexuan: The Star Luo Competition was held at the age of 24, and Mu En died at the age of 26 Ma Xiaotao: Participated at the age of 20, Mu En died at the age of 22 Zhang Lexuan is 4 years older than Ma Xiaotao, so Zhang Lexuan is 12 years old, Ma Xiaotao is 8 years old, the protagonist is 6 years old, and Long Aotian Wei Na is now 3 years old

Can you imagine, if one day the protagonist is killed, Huo Yuhao talks about taking revenge, but after several years, he becomes a good brother with the person who killed the protagonist, saying that letting go of hatred and peace is the most important thing, every time I think of this scene, I laugh to death, and the same goes for letting go of Huo Yun'er's hatred in the original work

Second Emperor of Ice and Snow, don't give it to Huo Yuhao

{"NickName":"Please give Yasuo to me","UserId":349265774} Author, who is the heroine? I would like to add Le Xuan as a single female protagonist. If I want to add a female protagonist, I would like to add Snow Emperor, Meng Hongchen, and Ye Guyi. I would not add other female characters from Shrek in the original work, nor would I add Orange or Xu Tianzhen. Isn't Zhang Lexuan's martial spirit the moon? How about the demise of her family through a Shrek conspiracy theory and then admitting to Kong Deming😁

I hope there is only Zhang Lexuan as the heroine

I remember that in the original book, the Noumenon Sect could not enter the Star Forest to hunt for soul rings.

What's the use of Huo Yuhao? Just go to the Sun and Moon Empire and come back. By the time Huo Yuhao grows up, the day lilies will be cold.

Can you explain their soul skills clearly? I don't even know what Zhang Lexuan's fourth soul skill is, and what the protagonist's second soul skill is? Also, I think Zhang Lexuan's first two soul skills seem a bit stretched. Although the hundred-year soul skill is just like that, it won't be like this.