Douluo Dalu: I Awakened a Workhorse Martial Soul from the Start

There is something wrong with your introduction. How can it be level 9.66? It should be level 9.96.

I watched the audio on a certain website and took a look. The setting was good, but the writing was too boring and I felt very self-indulgent. It's okay to follow San, but if you don't change anything, there's no point in writing. If you want to get in touch with the protagonist group, either you can get something from the protagonist group and gain something (similar to the luck flow I read before, you can get luck from the protagonist) Or open a harem to collect and dismantle CP (harem is also a way of writing, and the audience is also good). At least I have not seen these two in this book so far. The positioning of the protagonist is like a camera. It is equivalent to introducing the protagonist and setting at the beginning, and then copying the original work... Writing fan fiction is to see the kind of change of plot, make up for regrets or suppress the original protagonist (the protagonists of the original Douluo work have become gods, there is no need to make up for any regrets, or to suppress the flow), Or just don't touch the new plot of the protagonist group (like the books about Blue Silver Guide or Civilian Soul Master) You don't change anything, just add the setting of the protagonist at the beginning. It's better to read the original book. At least the original reader's perspective is on Tang San. He is pretending, and the reader can feel happy. Your current reader's perspective is on the protagonist. Nothing has changed. Just watching Tang San pretending, I don't feel any pleasure at all.

This is the first time I saw someone deliberately suppressing his cultivation speed for fear of cultivating too fast, so as to stay at the same level as Tang San.

Forget about anything else, don't make fun of the protagonist's name.

If you like San, just watch it

It feels like the flow of the original work, with small changes, but still better than the protagonist, and purely following the three characters

I'm hesitating whether to add a female protagonist or let the main character go solo? If you have good ideas, please share them. (Do not remove the original CP)