Traveling at the Same Time: We Upgrade Alone in the World

If you have a magic weapon, why don't you become a swordsman? Anyway, according to the so-called company system, you are wanted regardless of whether you practice or not. Even if you can't practice at the beginning, you can first get a batch of small gas tanks to train into gas tank shells, and then rockets, cluster bombs, cloud explosions, there will always be one that suits you.

It's so messy. After writing a few pictures, I jump to another world. I feel like I just ate something salty, but the next second I change my taste.

This group of people asking the author to accept girls, maybe no one wants them in reality. Guys who have never even touched a girl are just pointing at novels and fantasizing about them all day long.

The style of this book is very special, very indifferent. The protagonist is a real frigid person, just like a training machine. Reading this book is like or even colder than reading a physics and mathematics textbook, a feeling that completely obliterates sensibility.

There are so many rules and strict rules for one person, why would anyone write them down? There is also a direct warning against anyone who writes even a little bit out of line.

The writing is good, but it's too bland. There are very few dialogues. It seems that the author is not good at writing dialogues. As for the plot, it is assumed that you are familiar with the plot. Readers who are not familiar with the plot are not recommended to read it, as it will be very confusing. And there is no main world, one world at a time, which looks very messy. If you want to see the protagonists chatting in space, you don't need to watch it. There are almost no cheerful and funny conversations in the space, only straightforward descriptions of the situation. Moreover, it jumps a lot in the mortal world, and it suddenly builds the foundation and forms the elixir after a while.

The writing style is rather stiff and I feel lack of energy when reading it.

There's nothing particularly poisonous about it, but it does sound a bit bland, with no explosive points/climax.

You are too confused about cause and effect. When you want to break through to a high level, the price you have to pay will be too high.

The heroine must not be Nangong Wan. Isn't it obvious that the reincarnation master will be watching this?

Together? It won't be finished in less than 300 chapters like the Nine Gates of Prison, right?

There is no Dou Nuo in Curse, just like there is no Jerusalem in the West, and there is no Tifa in the 3D area

You also destroyed your entire clan, 666, Uchiha Itachi is like a new recruit compared to you.

For this type of author, you need to set up a main world, focus on those books, and describe the others occasionally! Your grades won't be bad if you write this way

Doesn't the world cut off a little too often?

It's pretty, but it's a pity there are so few

The current reading progress is 61%. The author's evaluation of this article is that the author's writing style is average and the narrative is discrete, but his ability to conceive stories is really good. I originally thought that I might not be able to read a book like this, but now I feel like I can finish it, so keep writing.

The author asked if there is a female protagonist? If there are many, it is single.

One person is missing the ghost spirit, the hokage is missing the corpse dog, and the three souls and seven souls are still eight short, but the author shouldn't only write 10 worlds, right? If you only write 10 words, it should be over 1 million words according to your schedule. Isn't it a little too little to write about Zhu Tianwen?

Shi'er's wife can find a way to save her, free bodyguard

It's a bit messy and bland (even a bit cold, as if a machine is moving there) and I don't know what the protagonist's purpose is. I want to change the perspective too quickly

Too cruel, destroying souls and souls, killing all the Hinata clan, farewell

The writing is okay, you can subscribe, I don't know if you can stand it.

rt

I've read half of it. It's Xiancao. Unlike other fanfics, I like to talk to myself and explain a lot, but I'm not good at it. I don't know if you think it's watery, but I don't think it's watery. It feels like it's all essence. Maybe you will think, hey, the original work is not there, the author created it privately, but I think it's normal. Only when you have your own understanding can you write a book by yourself. Otherwise, it will be exactly the same. I'll just read the original work and forget it, because the amount is relatively small (the above is my personal opinion at the moment)

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