The Gods Are Utterly Defeated!

He can throw a steel coil at supersonic speed with one hand, but he can only do it with one hand and with a steel coil; everything else is completely beyond the capabilities of an ordinary person.

Author, I wonder if you've ever played with a steel tape measure? It's the kind that you can just press and roll into a circle; I have one at home. The ability is described as throwing steel coils. As long as it's made of rolled steel, that's fine. There are no other additional conditions. They didn't specify the size, weight, or how many turns it should be rolled.

The protagonist reappeared.

After reading six chapters, I've been diagnosed with pre-exam fantasy. Someone, lock the author in a dark room; don't let him out without my order.

So-and-so, from a poor family, ranked in the top four of her grade but didn't do tutoring or part-time work to get early admission and instead took the college entrance exam to experience life. Now, right before entering the game, she has to ask her dad, who works on a construction site, for 5k to buy her equipment.

The first chapter is already flawed. Given the protagonist's superpowers, reinforced concrete isn't much stronger than a cookie is to an ordinary person. Since the mutated rats are known to possess stronger defense and considerable strength than the protagonist, the house would be something that could be easily demolished with minimal effort.

Is she beautiful or not? 🙂

Why talk so much to someone with sore skin? And then there's this talk of cause and effect and karma. You're supposed to be doing a dungeon run, why are you going to the future?

Your book title and the image make it look like it was created by AI. I clicked in twice, and only opened the book on the third try. Change the title and the image; it would look much better. My first impression upon clicking was that it was AI-generated. If I hadn't read the comments, I wouldn't have even bothered to read it.

The outline scroll doesn't exist, and neither does the small steel scroll? Such a large steel scroll—how could you possibly carry it without the ability? Your setting is based on the real world; you only gain this ability in a dungeon. Either you go directly to a building materials center near you, or you have to think of the outline scroll as a small steel scroll, or perhaps a steel ruler is also a type of small steel scroll! This must be a logical flaw from when the book was first written.