Versatile Mage: The Path of God

The first two chapters are just too much fluff, especially repetitive and rambling. They ramble on about Sequence Nine for ages, and there's a ton of useless descriptions of minor characters. It's ridiculous! If this is your first time writing fanfiction, don't try to be all-encompassing and pad your word count. Focus on making it coherent and at least readable.

Will this book ever be completed?

I was going to say something, but oh well, I'm not going to watch it anyway.