The Night Mansion, Beginning with Versatile Mage

It's pointless that someone with such strong abilities keeps relying on the original storyline and acting as a babysitter.

That's so cruel! The protagonist is already invincible, yet he insists on becoming a babysitter.

This book is good. Let's create a group and keep writing!

Poison, really poisonous. Invincible talent, but a terrible mentality. The author also allows Mo Fan to watch the protagonist's wife taking a bath and lets Mo Fan describe her figure to everyone without restraint. I really can't take it anymore, I feel so uncomfortable.

The very first chapter contradicts its own words, completely contradicting the synopsis's description of a detached, indifferent attitude.

I don't even know if you're writing about Ye Fu or a person. If you're so free, you might as well just write about a person with Ye Fu's abilities. The way you write it makes me uncomfortable.

It's just for fun; the main character has too much of a cheat code, and you don't even need to participate in the plot.

I have some comments regarding the whole of France. In the magical world, humanity is always at a disadvantage; even the strongest protagonist can only manage to kill a mid-level emperor at best. Regarding the issue of humanity's rise, the "Dual Soul Project" could be considered.

Although I've read many fanfictions and tried various "poisons" (fanfiction), and have developed a tolerance, I still can't accept unfinished stories.

Go home, what kind of garbage did you write?