The Night Mansion, Beginning with Versatile Mage

It's boring to have such a strong ability but keep being a babysitter in the original plot.

It's too poisonous. The protagonist is already invincible and has to be a nanny.

This book is good, please create a group to continue writing it.

Poison, really poison. Invincible talent, rubbish mentality. The author also allowed Mo Fan to watch the protagonist's wife take a bath, and also allowed Mo Fan to describe her figure to everyone unscrupulously. I really can't stand it, I feel really uncomfortable

In the first chapter, he slaps himself in the face, which is completely different from the description in the introduction of just hanging on to things that have nothing to do with him.

I don't even know whether you are writing about Ye Fu or a human being. Since you are so free, you could just write about a person who has the ability of Ye Fu. It makes me feel uncomfortable when you write like this.

For self-entertainment, the main character is too involved, and there is no need to participate in the plot.

I have something to say about Quanfa Humans are always weak in the magical world. No matter how strong the protagonist is, he can only kill a middling emperor by himself. Regarding the issue of the rise of mankind, we can consider the "Two Souls Project". As the name suggests, it is to allow people on the earth to travel to the magical world like Mo Fan and have the memory of the scientific world. As we all know, the magical world and the scientific world are parallel worlds. All people in the magic world have identities in the scientific world, so the dual soul plan can bring some benefits 1. Let everyone have two souls. Basically, it can be said that everyone is born with dual souls. 2 People in the scientific world can use the combination of science, technology and magic to create brilliant sparks. (1) Scientifically use physical principles to create some self-defense clothing that can disperse damage. (2) Some scientific technologies can store some magic, which is to release a magic of any level and then put it into a container for storing magic. It can be used at critical moments (releasing a primary magic can be stored in a vessel, but the user must awaken this magic and reach the primary level) 3 People in the scientific world bring not only technology but also advanced concepts, thoughts, chemistry, and technology. (1) Chemical reactions of some seemingly very common substances can make expensive resources cheap (don't think it's outrageous, before the invention of the Jenny machine, who knew that a few pieces of wood of different sizes can greatly improve the weaving efficiency) (2) Use chemical reactions or technology to fully and completely utilize the remaining value of the demon corpse (using demon fat as civilians can also be used to kill demons as self-defense weapons, etc.) (3) Let civilians use weapons made from chemical reactions or principles to kill demons. The above are all the opinions. If this suggestion is agreed by many people and book friends who want to see it in the novel, please give it a thumbs up. If more people agree, it proves that this opinion can be adopted. If you don't agree, just add "I don't agree with this suggestion" under this comment. If the latter comment is in the majority, it proves that this opinion cannot be adopted.

Although I have read many fanfics and drank different poisons, I have developed resistance to the poison. But I still can't accept the eunuch article

Go home, what the hell are you writing about?