To Escape, I Really Have to Keep You Under Control

I've read a lot, and it seems pretty good, but every time I read the synopsis, I can't help but want to complain about why books nowadays always tend to write synopses that are similar to henpecks.

Investigation report: "Number" - 681 Investigation subject: "In order to escape, I really have to control you" -Protagonist-[Nairn] Investigation result: [Physical Time Travel] Judgment basis: Abnormal characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know the time-travel situations of people traveling in this world in advance, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay on June 21, 2026

[One sentence of poisonous points: The author Wenqing's illness caused the protagonist and heroine to reveal their own secrets. When it was clear that they could be forcibly controlled, combined with the introduction of strict hepatic control, it can be said that the protagonist is ultimately the pendant of an unscrupulous person like the heroine. Detailed poisonous points: It is a long and tiring description of the heroine's appearance. If the old man suppresses it, he will just bow his head. Forget it. I can't find fault with you at the beginning, but what you write later will be silly. And he continues to describe how special this female version of the ancestor is to the protagonist. Yes, this heroine is the female version of the ancestor. As a mysterious scholar, he was able to survive the hunt of the extraordinary hunting team. In order to continue to survive, he even sacrificed to the evil god. If the protagonist is not born as a god, PS, his sister is Naia. If they were equals, they would have been played to death by the heroine long ago. Secondly, the literary youth is not a poisonous point at first. After all, the protagonist, as an ordinary person, has inexplicably traveled through time and space. He may have been assimilated by the evil god into a human flesh pendant and an external brain. Worrying is normal. Guess what? The following article pops up, my beloved sister Naia. To marry my sister Naia. I smiled with relief on the spot. 😅 Either you keep the protagonist's ignorance and exploratory nature, or you emphasize the protagonist's detachment and extraordinaryness. What does it mean to break the fourth wall to the readers and emphasize the protagonist's detachment and extraordinaryness, while at the same time emphasizing the protagonist's ignorance and weakness? You are not Anke, right? The options written are not based on dice, right? The character is not schizophrenic, right? Then tell me, you made this sophisticated protagonist weak because the heroine tried to commit suicide, just like the heroine showed her true feelings. What does that mean? Your physical control, mental diarrhea, and spectator mode are on. Why do you suddenly want pure love? You were still worried about whether you were assimilated by an evil god into an external brain and simulated personality in the last picture, but now you are starting to reveal your secrets to the heroine? What does it mean? A truly weak person will not reveal his weakness, right? Unless he actually knows that he is a god and does not care about life or death, this personality is indeed virtual.

Interesting, I am an evil god, and my ancestor is a sickly and beautiful girl?

I couldn't stand it after I saw my identity being exposed. No one wanted to watch it and cooperate with NPCs.

It's too watery, a bunch of inexplicable, long paragraphs of description, a lot of things that can be explained clearly in a few sentences have to be expanded. It feels like a pure plot, do you have to explain everything clearly in one chapter? The three golden chapters are all set up, which is very uncomfortable to read.

Keep writing LOL fanfics.

The writing is not good, I can't stand it at all