One Person: My Rewards Are Refreshed Daily

The Taoist priests from Longhu Mountain have no literacy at all. They don't know how to cultivate the Tao, and what are the inner and outer sects? It's so funny that I thought it was Xiao Baiwen's fantasy invasion under one person.

I guess I haven't even read the original work. The people in Longhu Mountain still bully the weak and fear the strong and engage in infighting.

Why is the quality of the Taoist priests in Longhu Mountain so low? After all, you are a Taoist, but what you wrote looks like a group of village aunts. I laughed at several of them, they were too watery.

I usually rarely write anything in the comment section, but I really can't help myself. The author gives me the feeling that he may have read the anime or manga of Under One Person in a hurry, and then forgot almost everything except the general plot and some characters. He did not intend to supplement the setting and check the information, so he just wrote it. During the writing process, I used the common plot structure of underworld cultivating immortals and urban supernatural beings to slap people in the face, which are common in Internet novels. The result is that there are problems from the world view to the character logic to the character relationships. My evaluation is: an urban immortality novel that has nothing to do with the characters, some well-known forces, and techniques under one person's trap Brother, this is not what the fan wrote. If the setting is unreasonable, you can modify it appropriately. In other aspects, it will be the same and it will be fine, but you cannot ignore the original settings... I quite like the idea of ​​this golden finger. The social structure of the world view under one person is a bit deformed, and the level of force itself is not particularly high. It is good that such a golden finger can control the intensity and have tricks; but you really can't appreciate the writing and plot... Come on...

What happened in more than ten seconds, there were various reactions from people from various forces, then a few taunts from the opponents, and then the chapter was over. What can be covered in three chapters can be covered in more than ten chapters. What happens next? After the incident is over, there will be more than ten chapters of reactions from all parties, right?

The outer disciples collude with outsiders to bully the inner disciples? Or in Longhu Mountain? How did you come up with the plot?

🙂 There is no need to pretend to be a fan in ancient novels

Apart from anything else, how could the Heavenly Master's character allow his disciples to act haphazardly?

I thought it was an exception in Chapter 3, but I couldn't stand Chapter 4 anymore.

This is a novel written by someone who takes advantage of classical cultivation. Why is it so strong?

The title of your book is refreshed every day. This is the highlight, not a daily routine.

After that, the Taoist man not only has low quality, but also has a bad mouth.

The old school of underworld practice circle

Just cut it, you don't have to write it down

If misfortune comes in, stop the loss immediately

No Author, you think you are writing a useless fantasy novel It's the outer sect's competition and the younger brother's backstabbing

After a brief look at it, I can't say I like it very much, but I can't say I hate it either. Maybe some people don't like the traditional plot of cupping and slap in the face, but this is not a bad point for me. It's just that the routine is too old. I would like to give you a suggestion. In the future, try to end this kind of plot within four or five chapters, otherwise you will be criticized for being superficial. Then, I actually came to see the God of Death. I wonder how soon the author will write about the God of Death?

Bremen band? ? Do the team members pray every day not to come to Mei? ? I heard that people who play in bands are pretty messy.