The Golden Finger Is Here? But I'm Already a Genius!

Qianwen helped me generate 20,000 words of a passerby's shock at the protagonist, 20,000 words of the psychological activities of the protagonist's breakthrough, and 20,000 words of narration comparison.

It's difficult. Once the protagonist makes a breakthrough in practice, you have to write three or four scenes. The map will be bigger later. Do you plan to write more than ten chapters about the thoughts and performances of the people around you regarding the protagonist's breakthrough?

When I saw the (quasi-martial artist), I had no desire to continue reading. I wonder if there are any quasi-martial arts masters or quasi-martial arts kings in the future. How can they be so accurate, half-step, etc. In such a disgusting state?

How did this big environment come into being where you feel inferior to others when you go out and you can still get into trouble with each other? The image of these principals was instantly ruined. Even the top management are trash. This is a world of rotten people.

Why do Gao Wu novels always have to be associated with middle school? Doesn't it seem childish? And he used a very childish name, what, No. 3 Middle School, Laoban.

Why do so many people say it was written by AI? Although he has some speech problems, those are very few. And overall, it's still a good read. But a big problem is that it is all water. The sea is all water. Old horse, you have four legs.

There have been a lot of new authors recently. Some are eunuchs who have been reincarnated, some are veterans who have been reincarnated, and there are some real newcomers. It's fun to read their introductions. . . The starting point is really getting stretched 🙂

First of all, you write that there are people participating in the starry sky trial. If you have a strong person in the third level of magical power or even a fourth level as a backer, you can go and let Tianjiao participate in the trial Then, you mentioned before that Principal Situ has the peak level of magical power in the third level and is in the top five on the entire planet And then, the provocateur was attacked by Situ when he was young and displayed in front of him. Revealing his talent As a result, you wrote that Situ took the protagonist to participate in the Starry Sky Trial. The old guy's first reaction was that Situ was looking down on human life In other words, Situ's talent as a young man and his current strength as written above no longer exist. He cannot get the slightest trust from his old acquaintances. What kind of waste does he think Situ is? It looks very weird This is the most poisonous point you wrote in your description of the previous seventeen chapters, which makes me feel most poisonous The author seems to be very active in the comment area, is there any solution? Many people also say that the author writes in AI. To be honest, I don't see much of it, but there is indeed a problem with the writing method. "Several people set foot on the starry sky for a trial", "The worst also has a father with supernatural powers", "Some of them are still in the fourth realm of martial arts". There are several people, the worst has magical powers, some are fourth, and Situ is fifth. Is this number correct?

The author should be a woman, and a young woman at that.

At first, I thought I would see a bunch of features superimposed in the early stage to kill enemies, but it turned out that the golden finger was useless and was no different from an ordinary genius article. Pure book title fraud

The setting is rather old-fashioned. The only thing that stands out is that he is a genius. The logic of the novel written is contradictory. The protagonist's starting planet is an abandoned planet, according to his design. Waste stars will pollute the bloodline. Zheshou, anyway, is a poisonous genius. How could he be born? In addition, the person on this planet is an Eighth Realm ancestor who was found guilty. There seems to be some hidden secrets. All the strong men in the clan were killed, but some seeds were left. If I were the mastermind behind the scenes, I would kill them all. The most buggy thing is that he got the top bloodline in the universe in an initial state of skills. Hematopoiesis 666 out of thin air. In my mind, a novel written in this way must have been 10 years ago. It is so ancient!

Finally found one who is not a headline-grabbing one.

I actually wrote about the Siheyuan.

I've read five chapters and it's not attractive at all.

Who is Ye Qing in Chapter 1? ?

The talent in the universe has dropped 100 times, and I am a genius. 😅

In the first chapter, a group of people were successfully defeated, but in the second chapter, the quasi-warrior was praised as a dragon. Is this right?

Return of the Dragon King, well, that's what it tastes like

I just read the first few chapters and couldn't stand the problems I saw. At the beginning, the protagonist's skills are perfect, and later I added that others can only master a small amount before becoming a martial artist. I will give you a calculation of 0.5 Times the efficiency of the first layer. The protagonist is at least 2.5 Times that of others. Don't say it doesn't exist. If you don't speed up the practice of Zhuang Gong, it will be a rubbish setting. Then he said that the protagonist is particularly good at eating, twice or three times as much as other people, so I'll just count it as twice. In the stage of laying the foundation, I don't count the protagonist's genius and understanding bonus, and you can't take elixirs before becoming a warrior. Everyone is the same. So, how many times is the protagonist's cultivation speed compared to others? In this case, when the protagonist breaks through to the quasi-warrior, there are still seven or eight with more than 90 strands of qi and blood. Why, are these all Dacheng Perfect Zhuang Gong? Or they still eat more than the protagonist. I don't see where the genius is at all. . .

Otherwise, after you finish writing, you can simplify it for AI and let it extract some key points and remove the meaningless water.

Updates have been so unstable since it was put on the shelves, and updates have been missing from time to time. The plot has become more and more boring, and the more I watch it, the more disappointed I am. I can't stand it anymore and I'm leaving. Goodbye.

It's actually quite obvious when reading

This is to prove the truth, right~(¯▽¯~)

Sixteen-year-old quasi-warrior? A genius?

I looked down on it and then everyone suppressed it and then was shocked. Later, I changed the map and went through the process. I think I should point out all the main connotations of the novel.

The updated plot is a bit bland.

Only one chapter was updated the day after it was released? What are you doing, author?

It's better to put it on the shelves than before it's put on the shelves? What do you think? Keep it...

The ten good karma are specifically divided into the good karma of the body: not killing, not stealing, and not committing sexual misconduct; the good karma of language: not lying, not speaking harshly, not being divisive, and not being frivolous; the good karma of the mind: not being greedy, not being angry, and not being delusional.

I'm thinking about one thing. The second sister and the other sister of the protagonist are said to be too strong and no one can convince them. They won't marry the protagonist in the end, right? In this way, the descendants will awaken either from the paternal or maternal bloodline. In short, they are from the human-dragon clan. Will their flesh really rot in their own pot in the end?