Cultivation Begins with Adding Points to Fate

1. About the beginning. Many people think this opening is too old-fashioned, a style from many years ago, and that you can tell the ending just by reading the beginning, which discourages most people. I struggled with this for a long time because people had talked about this issue before, and I had made changes several times, but some people still felt it wasn't good.

I don't understand why you're so fixated on writing about saving children. It's not that positive storylines are bad, but in a rigidly hierarchical world where the lower classes are treated like dirt, what's the point of risking your life to save children instead of improving your own strength? It's incredibly off-putting. What's the point of saving them all by yourself?

This system's ability to reply is truly appalling... Isn't it absurd that the protagonist can ask the system questions? Systems that can reply are either incredibly intelligent, like little sprites, or the protagonist has to figure out their functions on their own. This one, which is usually silent, suddenly asks the system if it's okay for the protagonist to do something when they have an idea—it's just baffling!

Did they block your cultivation technique? What I hate most are those stories that clearly state in the synopsis that you can level up and fuse techniques, but then in the main text they use techniques to block you and suppress your cultivation level. If it were me, I wouldn't even bother reading it. Otherwise, I'll just check it out.

This book is great; it has overpowered abilities that don't lower your level, and you're a rags-to-riches story with countless murders and arson.

It certainly doesn't suppress combat power, but with the cultivation technique being upgraded infinitely, what use are innate bone structure and aptitude?

At least it's not one of those overly homogenous online novels, so it's not bad. Keep it up!

Go buy two packets of poison and put them in the well. That's how fate will be decided, won't it?

So far, there don't seem to be any major problems, just that the plot is a bit rushed. It's a good watch, with few major flaws.

A lighthearted read. The characters are intelligent. Worth reading.