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In fact, it may be more suitable to make the world bigger and introduce non-Krypton life players. It may be more suitable to borrow backgrounds such as ice and fire, medieval warhammers, and Warcraft. Moreover, there is no need to talk about what Krypton life can be at the beginning. Krypton life can be used as an introduction, rather than making Krypton life so important.

Is there no one in my grand game area now?

The beginning of this book is amazing. But. After the escort copy ends. The reward is too low. Not cool enough. W This will greatly affect future results. What a pity. This book was mostly unsatisfactory or unfinished because of its unsatisfactory results. Hope I get slapped in the face

The creativity is online in every book, but the protagonist's IQ is never online. What's the cost?

The most fundamental issue is your choice of game. No matter NBA or strategy, battlefield, or war you choose, there are only two basic cool things about a book about a different world game like yours. One is the cool spots in the game world, and the other is the cool spots in reality. Let's not talk about the cool spots in the game. The cool spots in reality are nothing more than taking the abilities in the game and using them in the real world. So what kind of abilities are cool? It must be something that doesn't exist in reality. It exists in reality itself. What's so cool about it? So these abilities of yours can only be extraordinary abilities. It is not suitable for writing games that are closely related to reality. And have you noticed a problem? The games you chose are too long in content. For example, in NBA, let me ask you what is the starting point of the protagonist? Rookie? Does that mean he has to reach the finals? How long does it take for a rookie to reach the finals? For example, on the battlefield, do you want to hit the opposite headquarters? How long will it take? The essence is that the foreshadowing is too long. The escort you wrote at the beginning is very good. I tried the escort three times for free. The number is not much, and it is close to the ones in the high nest. Otherwise, it would not be on the new book list. Let me put it bluntly, you have to play this short and fast game for free every month, and then you have to play a small and medium-sized game if you really want to spend money. Then, the cool thing inside the game is that everyone sees the protagonist's perspective and ideas to do things. The cool thing outside the game is watching the protagonist use his extraordinary abilities to do what he wants in reality. If you don't know what type of game background to choose, you can click on the Qidian category. There, you can count how many books there are in each section of Qidian. You can arrange them according to this, fantasy, urban, light novel, fairy tale, science fiction, fantasy, short history, suspense, supernatural, game, martial arts. Excluding those that are not suitable as game backgrounds and those that do not have extraordinary abilities, isn't it just fantasy, fairy tales, science fiction, fantasy, suspense, supernatural, and martial arts? Look at the sports and military backgrounds you chose, the bottom two guys are

Why do I feel that the quality of the second script has plummeted, the story is not strong, and there is no imagination. It is just a simple account.

Big Sniper has liked to vote since the last book when something happened, but you can't please the readers, and he looks like a puppet with no thoughts or soul of his own.

I'm really convinced. Originally, I thought the combination of Nightmare War and Mental Hospital was okay, but after deleting it and rewriting it, I lost all sense of immersion.

If you can't earn lifespan, it's just a game article, so I'm going to read it again.

Did you give up the person you were pursuing for the lost pursuit? What a very intelligent author World War II and this civilization, I prefer that World War II Okay, since you have given up on the reader's perception of what you are reading, then give up on this book

The content of the game written by the author is really rubbish, and it feels like a random mess. Have you ever played the game? Learn how others like Qi Peijia write games. I have only read and played all of your books, and they are all down the toilet. The system is unclear, boring, and the world setting is incomplete. In the game area, only the Three Kingdoms book can be read.

It was originally well written, but whoever fooled me again made such a mess, I can't understand it at all.

I've been reading your book The Time Traveler and My Daughter since junior high school. It's been ten years! Look how many books you have cut through these pages? You are not a professional author and you are counting on this book to make a living. Of course, if you really expect to write a book and eat, I feel like I will starve to death. The plot and writing are still not improving. Even the routines and your old books have deteriorated. Not to mention the habit of being lazy and randomly setting unrealistic settings to make people laugh. I don't expect you to refund your money. Can you just keep reading this book normally? It's making some progress.

I'm really convinced. The data was so good at the beginning, and it was also listed in Sanjiang. The website promoted it vigorously, so I just put it on the shelves and cut it off. It's so cruel. Even Lin Pingzhi of Swordsman is not as cruel as you.

It was cut as soon as it was put on the shelves, the more it was cut, the worse it got, and the worse it got, the more cut it was. After analyzing and analyzing, I failed to analyze a key question. Why does the author who is so eager for quick success write a subject that is not eager for quick success, and let the protagonist who is not eager for quick success play a game that is not eager for quick success? I want to look for a long-term meal ticket, but I finally found one, but I am afraid that the meal ticket will not last too long. There are various controls to extend the service life. When I turn around and find that the quality of the meal ticket is too poor, it is better to find a new one... You said why should you do it? You have to write the story with the idea of ​​how to attract more readers after writing a popular book. The first critical point is how to not rush into the street.

Front row reminder: This author used to call the two-shot sniper style. His style of writing was biased towards sadistic masters and he also liked bad endings. I clearly remember his first death game, Pig's Knuckle, where he defeated monsters and upgraded for hundreds of chapters. I thought that Pig's Knuckle was already the strongest player in this game, but something happened. In this death game, all the big bosses of real-life games are more powerful than Pig's Knuckle, not only in terms of personal power but also in financial power. They worked together for hundreds of chapters and then just sit back and watch the sky while Pig's Knuckle was a minion, and then nothing happened and it ended in a few chapters.

I don't see it, I think the results and content don't match. A level 5 writer + 20,000 collections shouldn't be at this level.

Has he been reincarnated and rebuilt? What will the vest be called?🤐

This kind of real game should be written in a serious, cautious and cruel way. I didn't read the author's last book, but it felt more and more like an ordinary online game. It was written in a frivolous and funny way, without the feeling of a real game.

I don't quite understand why I deleted the nightmare battlefield and wrote a story about farming and hegemony. The tone of the script of Nightmare Battlefield is consistent with that of Escort. They are both game flows, and Nightmare also adds elements of suspense, which makes it more immersive than the first pure game, and can also induce changes in the protagonist's mentality. It's hard to comment on the sudden change to a farming style. Other people's farming competitions start from the first chapter, attracting readers who love to watch farming style. I don't understand the sudden change of style after writing so much.

In the second stage, I will start all over again. If you have the courage, I will give you a thumbs up.

Gee, I suddenly remembered that it has been two months since the new book was released and I came to see how many chapters have been updated. It turns out that it has been a month since I read The Eunuch. It's really yours. Who would dare to read this book if the author has such a good reputation? I definitely won't.

Sure enough, he was raised to death🙂

I'm quite curious about the core setting of this book. The protagonist has 50 Yangshou coins when he comes in. The normal logic of a cool novel is to all in with 50 coins, and then earn 500 coins by eating chicken. However, the setting of this book is that there is no way to earn lifespan, so in the eyes of readers, no matter how hard you try, it will be a loss, and no matter what the reward is, it is just game currency. Moreover, according to the normal outline, life span freedom is only an early mini-boss. After all, krypton life is mentioned at the beginning, and new cool points have to be created later. To sum up, I am quite looking forward to how the protagonist will break the situation and what kind of work the author can do after that. As a result, the author gave up the treatment and exploded into the night. It's a pity.

But the framework was not set correctly at the beginning. In this life-saving game, life is the currency. What readers are most concerned about is how to earn life-span currency in the game. The rewards for your first escort game may be mediocre, and you may not use them because they are free, but you must give clues to gain longevity. Those games of yours often require a long lifespan to be redeemed. Obviously there is a way to recharge the lifespan. So you have to reveal this in the first level. Then the convenient way to expand is not to play for free, but to directly earn money. The more money you earn, the more you can earn, and then scroll forward. This kind of framework is the most powerful way to write.

Tell me after reading two chapters? ? ?

As a very short story, it may be the best ending to reach the highlight moment of life in the final battle of the Escort Bureau and then end with a gorgeous curtain call.

I don't know what I'm doing, I feel very good. I just read it and started to follow it. Suddenly it was cut. I think you shouldn't care too much about other people's opinions and just write according to your own ideas. If you feel it's wrong, you can fine-tune it. This way, it will be ruined if you make drastic changes. Then you need to work more on the outline and make changes to the outline. Adjust the plot in the future. Don't just make drastic changes. It's numb.

The great eunuch, the god of eunuchs, Toad, has opened a new book. Are all the great eunuchs cutting books to celebrate?

This author's style would be pretty good if he borrowed the idea of ​​a desperate dark night or a secret corner.