Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei’s Moonlight Senior

To put it bluntly, if you get what you want, is it still the same person?

Single, hundred, married, ? I suggest you speak frankly; keeping it to yourself won't get you many views.

Is the senior student monogamous? 🙂

The layout and expression are both disastrous. The author seems to have deliberately avoided using any punctuation marks other than periods, such as semicolons, double quotes, and semicolons. The information density per page and paragraph is absurdly low. What I see is not a story, but long stretches of mournful haiku. This style of writing completely contradicts most people's reading habits.

You should just abandon this story as soon as possible. Maybe you can find readers for other fanfiction about a "white moonlight" character, but with Dragon Raja, people only want to see Lu Mingfei's transformation from the inside out, not him being led around like a dog. Your novel's theme is off-track. Go back to writing your female-oriented fanfiction.

This is a male-oriented site; female-oriented stories should obediently go back to the female-oriented section.

It's to my liking for now, keep it up and don't cut it!

Using AI to enhance the image is not impossible, but you need to know how to use it. Otherwise, the format, expression, and layout will all be very unpleasant. It can copy the content of novels written by people with good writing skills and let AI refer to it to beautify them.

The layout is utterly hopeless; every few words or sentences are broken into paragraphs. Author, are you writing a novel, not modern poetry? Regardless of whether the writing is good or bad, the reading experience is simply awful.

The most amazing thing about the "white moonlight" is that even if the real person came back to her, she wouldn't be able to defeat her past self.