Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei’s Moonlight Senior

Let me put it bluntly, if Bai Yueguang gets it, is it still called Bai Yueguang?

Single, hundred, married,? It is recommended to speak up and hide things that not many people will read.

Are seniors monogamous? 🙂

Disaster-level typesetting and disaster-level expressions. The author seems to have deliberately avoided using all punctuation marks except periods, and the information density of a single paragraph on a single page is ridiculously low. What I see is not a story, but a long haiku mixed with ghosts and tears. This kind of writing is simply contrary to the way most people read; my brain is seeing it. Then the sentences will be segmented, and you will end up with a whole page. There is no other punctuation. It breaks a smooth natural paragraph into pieces, making the coherent reading experience stumbling. To put it bluntly, your writing reminds me of the time I was tasting Mary Sues in Tieba in 2009. There is also the fact that the author has not responded to the single, hundred, and married issues in this article. Judging from the early plot, it is the take-all route of Lu Mingfei + Xia Mi. I don't know if the author has noticed one thing. In the heroine novel, Bai and Marry are two audience groups, and singleness is the greatest common denominator. Trying to explore two similar but contradictory audience groups at the same time will only cause a complete tear.

Eunuch, if you go to other fandoms to write Bai Yueguang, some people may read it, but in the Dragon Clan, everyone just wants to see Lu Mingfei change from the inside out, instead of being led around by others like a dog. The purpose of your novel is wrong. Go back and write your female channel.

It's quite to your taste for the time being. Come on, don't cut it.

This is a male channel, if you're writing on a female channel, just go back to the female channel.

It's not impossible to use AI to beautify, but you have to be able to use it. It will be very uncomfortable regardless of format, expression, and typesetting. You can copy the content of novels written by people with good writing skills, and let AI refer to this to beautify it.

The layout is despairing. Each sentence must be divided into paragraphs. The author is writing a novel, not a modern poem. Not to mention whether the writing is good or not, it just sucks in terms of reading experience.

The most awesome thing about Bai Yueguang is: after that time passes, even if he comes, he will not be able to defeat his past self.