Start with Meat

Suddenly I came across the "You Gui" that I had abandoned before and it was unfinished. I made this comment without any criticism: This book has great potential, and at least the number of words in each chapter is definitely not ambiguous, especially for a new writer. The main line is also closely linked to the pressure of environmental survival represented by the Zhou family, and we can also see the fate of later characters like Yong Qiang to repeat the "travel" element, making the once scattered main line clear again. However, I want to say a but. Like many writers who rely on [inspiration] to write, this book was written to reach certain scenes in the heart, so the more you go to the back, the more torture you get, the less flesh and blood, and the less spiritual. For example, there are more "ecstasy" descriptions that are not friendly to readers; the power system is dry and narrow, as if a character has replaced the scenery of a profession. This is not to criticize the above writing method. Rather, it is a test of knowledge and knowledge. Many local jargons are interesting to see, but a mature writer should not be like this. As a boy who once fantasized about becoming a writer, I also started to imitate and write some beginnings, but it was not without good results. However, what troubled me later was writing the outline, and there was a large gap between "Scene in My Heart" and "Scene in My Heart", so I had to bring in new characters, new confrontations, and new writing methods to endure it... It's messy to say a lot, but in short, I want to say that this kind of suffering is also necessary.

The more people lack something, the more they like to emphasize it. The less literary talent and ability to speak well, the more I like to compose words that criticize and criticize the teeth. Speaking of criticizing the teeth is even a compliment. It is clearly a smelly dog ​​shit wrapped in a torn rag. The author is smug about hiding it and kicking it in his arms. He invites everyone to come and take a look. He endures the smell and takes a closer look - I'll fuck you!

This book is a bit of a waste. The setting is weird, this way of writing will never be popular. This book is very similar to Ten Thousand Life Demons, but others showed extraordinary power at the beginning, and then used a bowl, soil and seeds to grow extraordinary professions, and the power system was created. I carefully read the first twenty chapters of this book and I'm still confused.

Talking about such a world of extraordinary professions, how do the officials suppress these extraordinary people who can be said to be people in the devil's way? Ordinary people are simply fish. Is there a powerful official series or the three traditional religions?

The biggest problem with this book is that there are only noun explanations in the early stage. The Riddler, after reading more than ten chapters, there is no explanation. I really can't stand it.

I saw the second domestic-style series. The protagonist of the other one is a lantern maker.

I feel like it was deliberately written to be so obscure.

This book was a bit confusing at first, but it got full circle later on.

It's a bit Riddler, with too much set-up.

Not every kind of book can be copied. Some things that are too evil require a specific mental state to write. There is only one Li Huowang as a starting point. If you imitate others and try to be mysterious, you will only end up writing a mess.

I didn't understand much at first, why the protagonist and this young master share the same body, and why did this young master turn into flesh?

I am somewhat of a Riddler. Why do I feel more and more self-conscious?

I hope the author can write down the story in his heart. I'm still wondering why it hasn't been published yet. The world created by the author is attractive. Keep writing.

When I write about the shadow play, the protagonist is still drifting with the crowd and falls into the shadow puppet maker's game again As a reader, the protagonist's situation is unclear at the beginning, and it is excusable to fall into the peddler's game. Now the shadow puppet maker has entered the game in a daze again. He clearly sees that there is something wrong, the water he needs to drink, and the game he should be included in. He has been setting up riddles from the beginning, but there is no solution process, and he has been played in the game. The original game, the peddler's game. The shadow puppet show... I keep digging holes but not filling them, and the threads are all tangled together in a confused way. No wonder my grades are not improving Thirty-six lines is really a subject that I like very much. The world view is also quite interesting, but there are no keywords about folklore in the introduction. The traffic should not be very accurate.

It's really well written. The Riddler was a little confused at first, but then he felt comfortable after accepting this set of settings.

After reading dozens of chapters, it's still the same as the first chapter, which only contains riddles without explanation. It's uncomfortable to watch, and the content of the battle is also uninteresting. The setting is a bit like Twilight Divide, but the system is very vague.

Is there no proper sequence? Expand the world view

Has it been changed? The latest plot of meeting the cook in the temple seems to be different from the plot I saw yesterday.

The world created is very suspenseful and weird, and the different professions are carefully designed. The lyrics of each profession are particularly charming, the writing is very good, and the plot is quite attractive with twists and turns. After reading the latest chapter, I just don't understand the title of the book. What does "" mean? Are you foreshadowing what will happen later? Moreover, the title of the book "Start with Meat Guide" is not very clear to passers-by, so it is not very attractive.

The salesman Lu Yin has two crafts, how can he superimpose the taste of salad? Is this a vest or a new creative author?

If you like reading, you can go to the government library to read folklore novels. They are available in all provinces across the country. It is a series of books. The name seems to be Chinese folklore novels. I forgot.

The book Next Door Salad has a mystery fusion genre. The subject matter is quite interesting. I don't know why it's not on the shelves. Maybe it's because it's a newbie? Such a quick cut. It is recommended that you change your vest, otherwise it will easily lead to lightning protection.

Everything is good, but I'm too tired to read the writing and can't understand it.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful book.

The plot is interesting, but the story is so foggy that I kept doing The Riddler, which made me even more confused after reading it.

I have no idea what will be written next.