Visitors from the Abyss: the Devil's Dimensional Expedition

There are not many books about the Abyss Demon. The starting point is two famous books, "Private Customization of the Great Demon King" and "Abyss Demon of All Worlds"

It's better to be a real devil, don't criticize a nanny who looks like a devil or something like that

Damn it, the author's ability to withstand stress is so poor, he can be offended by just a few words. There are so many strange things in the abyss, you can write them in any way you want. You can write that he can use the holy light to hold the holy sword. Why do you think so much? The most important thing is to write it down.

Inner dialogue, too many thoughts

You are a devil, but you are not a devil. Just use your strength to conquer it. Why are you engaging in these conspiracies?

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In my opinion, these chapters of John are a failure. They both need the power of the devil and play the devil's tricks. Why should John be helped? You should just stand aside and give him strength when John can't even survive, let alone protect his sister. I don't believe he will refuse, but you get along day and night and still have feelings for each other. This is very devilish, and letting John see it makes the protagonist look like a clown. To be honest, there are many people with three eyes and a lot of trouble. It has to be these two. Without the protagonist, these two brothers and sisters would have died long ago. How would they be able to have food, clothing, and qualifications to change their lives like they are now? In the end, John was not grateful to you, devil. You really failed. You won't turn her sister into a succubus in the future.

😩 Just eating and eating, no story or plot, I should finish writing three chapters and enter the big world.

Isn't it as crazy as killing a lucky passerby randomly?

Demonic text, I hope the combat power can be as high as the Demon of the Abyss of All Realms

All I can say is that no matter how many reasons eunuchs have, they are still eunuchs. If you can't even finish writing it, let alone write it well. For an author who never stops using force, I hope your next book will have the same ending. This book will have the same ending.

I hope it's really about demons. Cruel and bloodthirsty without a trace of kindness, capricious and everything only obeys itself.

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It feels good. The author has his own settings. The reason why some people feel that the novice village is slow is because they have copied the settings of other demonic stories.

In the introduction, Ge Huo's good news, what is this?

One problem in many novels, whether they are protagonists or villains, is that they do not think carefully about things that threaten their own interests and personal safety, or they do things that may lead to their own death.

However, it is indeed difficult to write demonic stories... Demonic Civilization is a very easy-to-write infinite flow of planes, and it can easily enter different worlds to start plots, but there are always some hidden pitfalls... First, in general fantasy/infinite flow, the teaching levels and NPCs in the novice village are somewhat useful, and there are plots that can be advanced, but for the upgrade and evolution type of demonic stories, these NPCs are of little use None, the names and backgrounds are all useless, they are all experience points. It is difficult to deal with not writing too much early content and pushing the plot; Secondly, it is difficult to write a pure evil person. Pure evil is the same as pure good. The character must be "strong" at the beginning, have personality and ability, so that it can be distinctive and not become a clown/hypocrisy. This results in the inability to start with low-level leveling... And affects the way of writing the regular upgrade flow. The better typical characters of Hunxie and Shoushan are the cursed Suna and Beidou's Kenshiro; Thirdly, in the advancement of the story, exploration and force formation are also problems. Demonic stories cannot be directly substituted with conventional fantasy maps. What kind of challenges should be arranged for the protagonist needs more design. The most typical summoning and commanding brother of the demon must be commanding, and the shaping of the Hunxie camp must be considered... The better plot here is The Shin Megami Tensei series, and Sargeras in World of Warcraft, the former has diversified character creation, while the latter is a demonized Titan of Order who relies on the most typical demonic logic of having the largest fist to forcibly rule the Chaos Legion for an expedition To put it bluntly... Demonic writing is actually not suitable for the traditional upgrade flow... It is suitable to write a protagonist who is not weak at the beginning, and challenge some supernatural worlds, ruins, doomsday cities, and high-magic fantasy worlds...

Have you ever been in a nightmare of the abyss? Just write it here✍🏻️take it for granted😃

It's also good to write about Solomon's Seventy-Two Pillars of Demons.

The writing is good, but there is less. This kind of text needs a world view and setting to attract people. Fantasy heaven type. In the future, will we encounter the world view of wizards, mages, DND gods, and the war with the kingdom of heaven? Well, in this article, it is called the kingdom of heaven, and other civilizations. I feel that the author needs to think about it. Another issue is the issue of combat power. Well, low-level demons, mid-level demons, high-level demons, and then the demon lords after that need to have a well-designed combat power structure. I'm afraid that I won't be able to write anymore. This kind of writing ability will easily collapse, causing the entire plot to collapse. Like Titans and Dragon Kings, and some Witcher-style novels. They are all unable to control the entire world view and combat power, which then leads to the ending falling apart and the plot being unable to continue.

Another demon novel is gone, so I went back to read it again. Obviously the competition is so low and there are so few good ones.

Cut it so quickly? I feel like my writing style is okay. Do you want to write high-quality articles?

About seven or eight years ago, I read a novel about an abyssal demon that evolved from a worm. The novel started very well, with upgrades for survival, farming, and elves. But not surprisingly, it was over after more than a hundred chapters, and I had nothing to write about after leaving the novice village!

? I just got it today. I was happy and took a look at how many chapters there were. But you told me you were a eunuch?

What is the level of Balor Fire Demon?