Comprehensive Network: from the Undead Catastrophe to the Star Sea Emperor

After reading Chapter 30, I don't really want to read anymore. The author has probably played a lot of games, read a lot of novels, and is also good at making jokes. This should be considered an advantage. Personally, I think the writing is good, better than many so-called great writers, and there are no typos or sentences. The plot is too bland and uneventful, which is a fatal flaw. The plot can basically be summarized as a cycle of starting the game → beating it easily → getting loot to improve your strength → playing the game again. There are no contradictions, no accidents, no goals, and no psychological description in the whole process. It is a pure anti-flow of consciousness. There is too little content, and thirty chapters are filled with unnecessary hydrology, which is also a fatal flaw. By Chapter 30, we have reached the third dungeon. The three dungeons (goblin camp, haunted mine, and murloc beach) were all poorly written ten or even twenty years ago, but they must be described in detail every time. In addition, as of Chapter 30, the only equipment with attributes that can be used is the protagonist's natural weapon. Apart from the protagonist, there are no other main characters. Apart from playing dungeons, there is only a subplot of renting a house... I can only say that this way of writing makes me not want to read.

What kind of sublime does 40 career cards make you become? From the West to the East, there is no connection, and the comprehensive network cannot see it. The content of the pure online shopping platform is to upgrade the dungeon and then to a stronger dungeon. The running account has no mainline core. Advantages: The copy of the online game is well written and the writing style is good.

I don't know how many chapters of Eunuch this can last.

Before the emergence of real-life human wolves, this book was really good. The plot logic was normal. Except for the relatively small pleasant points, there were no major poisonous points. Later, when the real world was added, it changed the taste a bit. Although there was a lot written in it, it always felt fake and empty. Actually, there is no need to write about extraordinary things on the real side. Zongwang can write a lot of things. If you write both lines, you will easily be unable to stop the car and end up being a eunuch. Also in terms of skills, you are involved in a lot of extraordinary professions, and the skill system is also complicated. Let's simplify it. Write more copies. Too much realistic profiling will be too obvious.

In the early stage, the skeleton is coated with steel, and in the later stage, it is directly used as Necron.

High-quality seedlings from comprehensive network, worth looking forward to

Just when I saw the reality, it suddenly stopped, and then there was an inexplicable link. You necromancer, what kind of alchemy heaven are you doing? The painting style doesn't match well. Shouldn't it be a potion system? Then after reading a few chapters in a row, reality disappeared?

Good morning, noon and evening everyone Because my pig brain is often easily overloaded, and I have rewritten the previous content, there may be many bugs in the previous content. If you find something unreasonable, please feel free to point it out. We also welcome reasonable criticisms and modification suggestions. There may be big problems with the writing in some places, but I was so confused when I wrote it that I didn't realize it at the time. Please give me your opinions in this case. Finally, if you have any good ideas or creative ideas, please post them here. I write a book behind closed doors and it is easy for my thinking to solidify. I am the pigeon of today, a new author. I am very happy to turn my imagination into words and show it to readers. Thank you very much for reading this inferior novel written by me, a third-rate writer ()

The magic spring written in 32 previously contained Thorin Now 31 has just entered the National Security Bureau. Thorin has become a resentful spirit. Where did the armor come from? There is also the chapter title of the twin souls of resentment. The content of the chapter is written about the twin resentful spirits again The author please follow suit

It feels like it's following the Cthulhu route. As for the Emperor of the Star Sea, he should be the evil god.

Mainly, I feel that the writing is very simple and easy to read in one sitting. Even the jokes are just embellishments. The reasons for choosing the character structure and the principles for achieving abilities are well explained, instead of just using gamification to explain.

It's bad. It smells so bad.

I browsed the comment section of Yi Qiu Xingzhe's book and saw the author's 23-year-old comment about writing a book. I clicked on the homepage and saw how this book with over 100,000 words...

Check out my daily guide, let's see how it goes

Updates resumed? Have you finished rewriting? Did it change a lot? Do you need to rewatch it?

The writing is pretty good, especially the element of killing monsters.

Why isn't he the Emperor of the East China Sea? (Annoyed)

I saw a comprehensive online article before. The introduction is very similar. What does this book have to do with that one?

How long do you plan to use it? It's been eleven days. In this situation, you're not so much rewriting as you are already eunuch.