Douluo: Whose Rock Spirit Can Summon Mountains?

First of all, there is the plot of rescuing Zhu Zhuqing. It is so classic that I have no interest in watching it. Secondly, do you think it is appropriate for the author to give you soul bones when you meet? Someone who is not a disciple, but in the end, he didn't become a woman, or he became an alternative version of Chihiroji in disguise. The poisonous point for soul bones is too great. You, the author, are no longer a novice. How could you write such a poisonous point? When she said she wanted to go to Shrek, her first reaction was to kill her. She was the one who deserved it the most among the original Shrek Seven Monsters. If she didn't covet the position of queen, it would be better for her to hide or join the Spirit Hall than to find Dai Mubai, who had been played three hundred times by others.

The most important thing is that I have read too many fanfics, and there are too many Zhu Zhuqing as the heroine. I feel that when I read Zhu Zhuqing's female protagonist fanfics now, I feel a little pity for the male protagonist. Some of the female characters have become buses, and the time traveler has come to get on. It is disgusting for people who read it. I suggest the author not to write about her. It's enough to just be an apprentice and train her as a thug. And if you can't write the emotional line well, it's better not to write it at all.

The martial arts is good, but the plot is not good.